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Focus23
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6. "RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself"
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Wed Aug-31-05 11:57 PM by Focus23

  

          

*Narrow your vision to the size of a boxcar.
40 feet long, 10 feet high ceilings.
*It holds only up to 20 people.
*What is happening on board?
*Add sights, smells, tastes, touch, and other ambience...



Railways run roughshod by
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Steel wheels squealing
Giving me that feeling of...

(("Where ever we're going, we're getting there fast."))
A stark stretch from the past trip that seemed to last forever.

Now, it's 'Now', and soon to be... 'When'
I drop hot poems n' flows in this boxcar of friends (silently, sshhh!)
Bending you're ear, while looking for cheers, in my imagination,shhhh!


sippin on Sangria while we agreein' upon the idea
to invite others to enjoy the delight of a symposium thea...

Ideas Terrific, no need to get specific,
Folks 'uppin' here are having FUN!
Never Bored.

((JUM JUM CHOO CHOO!!))

SSssuuuuuuuuuuuuUUU!

ALL ABOARD!!!!

Damn, we played through another stop,
n' got more folks adding to the train.
Painfully stashed away, my words RUN insane to DMC
n' Suddenly theres a Dj...



  

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Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself [View all] , InGeniousPoet, Tue Aug-30-05 08:43 AM
 
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Demonstration-
Aug 30th 2005
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RE: Demonstration-
Aug 30th 2005
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RE: Demonstration-
Sep 19th 2005
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      I never scroll up
Sep 20th 2005
33
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Aug 30th 2005
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RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Aug 31st 2005
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RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Aug 31st 2005
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RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 01st 2005
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      RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 01st 2005
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           RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 01st 2005
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                RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 02nd 2005
10
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 02nd 2005
11
Boxed In
Sep 06th 2005
12
i like this idea. mine: Hallway To Heaven
Sep 06th 2005
13
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 07th 2005
14
up...
Sep 10th 2005
15
i'll try--coercion really
Sep 11th 2005
16
RE: i'll try--coercion really
Sep 12th 2005
17
it SHLDA read like this:
Sep 12th 2005
18
up.
Sep 14th 2005
19
The Others
Sep 15th 2005
20
RE: The Others
Sep 15th 2005
21
      RE: The Others
Sep 16th 2005
22
           RE: The Others
Sep 16th 2005
23
                So I pass the baton back...
Sep 16th 2005
24
Is that how the story ends?
Sep 19th 2005
25
no marijane...it'll take a slight twist tho'
Sep 19th 2005
26
RE: no marijane...it'll take a slight twist tho'
Sep 19th 2005
27
      RE: no marijane...it'll take a slight twist tho'
Sep 19th 2005
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      The Others
Sep 19th 2005
30
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 19th 2005
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RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 20th 2005
32
The Happiest Man Alive
Sep 22nd 2005
34
howz abouts we archives this???
Sep 23rd 2005
35
      I second that emotion...
Sep 23rd 2005
36
           can we get a third vote??
Sep 25th 2005
37
                RE: can we get a third vote??
Sep 25th 2005
39
downtown metro
Sep 25th 2005
38
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 25th 2005
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soul music
Sep 26th 2005
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up
Sep 26th 2005
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RE: up
Sep 26th 2005
43
      Ressurected
Sep 29th 2005
44
rider eighteen
Oct 02nd 2005
45

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