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20. "The Others"
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The conductor has rung out his usual announcement
"All aboard!!?"
I am, but not fully comfortable yet.
As the chuga-chuga of the huge steel wheels take me towards my destination
i ponder
Wondering with my first real anylitical observation of the crowd
why does this modern train
hold such a palpable demonstration of that old-time-religion.
No
Not the one that hums and beats foot to hard wood
fanning an overmade-up face
but the underlying bad news
of the Good Ol' Boy.
How does transportation whisper about a situation
occupation
opression
and ultimately segregation?
The whites carelessly read they're "Business Reports"
Holding their heads at no particular level
yet still exuding some air
While the "others" look on contemplating
how to hold their heads in that same nonparticular way
I frown at the absence of vehicle and suit amongst "the others"
Until
the sun gleams across my figure
highlighting my hands neatly draped across my jeaned lap
accentuating their blackness
at that moment
I notice the crick in my neck
from trying to position my head correctly
.
.
.
For I too am on this train

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WITH CUZ (STACEY) GONE, I'LL NEVER REALLY BE HERE AGAIN

I swear I'm a marry an OKP


Nakia Genevieve are my middle names... Not my attempt to morph Phenom with Novembersgift... But...

  

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Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself [View all] , InGeniousPoet, Tue Aug-30-05 08:43 AM
 
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Demonstration-
Aug 30th 2005
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RE: Demonstration-
Aug 30th 2005
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RE: Demonstration-
Sep 19th 2005
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      I never scroll up
Sep 20th 2005
33
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Aug 30th 2005
3
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Aug 31st 2005
4
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Aug 31st 2005
5
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Aug 31st 2005
6
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 01st 2005
7
      RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 01st 2005
8
           RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 01st 2005
9
                RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 02nd 2005
10
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 02nd 2005
11
Boxed In
Sep 06th 2005
12
i like this idea. mine: Hallway To Heaven
Sep 06th 2005
13
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 07th 2005
14
up...
Sep 10th 2005
15
i'll try--coercion really
Sep 11th 2005
16
RE: i'll try--coercion really
Sep 12th 2005
17
it SHLDA read like this:
Sep 12th 2005
18
up.
Sep 14th 2005
19
RE: The Others
Sep 15th 2005
21
      RE: The Others
Sep 16th 2005
22
           RE: The Others
Sep 16th 2005
23
                So I pass the baton back...
Sep 16th 2005
24
Is that how the story ends?
Sep 19th 2005
25
no marijane...it'll take a slight twist tho'
Sep 19th 2005
26
RE: no marijane...it'll take a slight twist tho'
Sep 19th 2005
27
      RE: no marijane...it'll take a slight twist tho'
Sep 19th 2005
28
      The Others
Sep 19th 2005
30
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 19th 2005
29
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 20th 2005
32
The Happiest Man Alive
Sep 22nd 2005
34
howz abouts we archives this???
Sep 23rd 2005
35
      I second that emotion...
Sep 23rd 2005
36
           can we get a third vote??
Sep 25th 2005
37
                RE: can we get a third vote??
Sep 25th 2005
39
downtown metro
Sep 25th 2005
38
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 25th 2005
40
soul music
Sep 26th 2005
41
up
Sep 26th 2005
42
RE: up
Sep 26th 2005
43
      Ressurected
Sep 29th 2005
44
rider eighteen
Oct 02nd 2005
45

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