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30. "The Others"
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Slowly each eye lid broke its seal and surveyed the surroundings.
mingling people filtering into now empty seats and benches
The soft grind of the tonage of steel and hope remixed itself
with the blaring of the trains horn.
I breathed evenly as if deciding whether to inhale my surroundings or to venture back into the warm lull of my dreaming.
Scanning the interior of the tram I felt an odd emptiness.

She was gone.

The "Business Pages" were sitting next to me
whispering of shareholders and corporate alliances and boardroom takeovers,
Nauseating me.
She must have gotten tired of it too.
Curiosity filled me gently, where had she gone?
Another boxcar?
Possibly

I looked at the now moving horizon
playing my little game of placement markers.
Modern buildings, surrounding the epicenter,
a expansive plaza flanked by a history I do not recognize
but have been taught all too well...

We were in Philadelphia.
Liberty, Eagles, and Cheesesteaks rambled their way into the air
spray painted onto limestone mosaics,
rising out of alleyway kitchens
and whoring itself in courtroom boundaries.

Did she get out here? Does this place peak her
wonder and bewilderment?
This abolitionist refuge?
This sinister outcrop of USA INC.
overshadowing poverty and late night Mickeys.
Where is this woman with the nutmeg skin headed?

The train hurtled itself faster against the aging matter of Time,
a meloncholy lullaby coaxing me off into a distance.
My hand touched the "Business Pages"
conveniently placed beside me.

I saw the hand written riddle above the Stock Report
"What is black and white and red all over"

A stoic chuckle lodged itself in my throat.

Shame my dear, I believe its Shame.





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"With peace and love in my lungs,
I hold my breath until the Poet returns."

--Boxcarboys

  

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Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself [View all] , InGeniousPoet, Tue Aug-30-05 08:43 AM
 
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Demonstration-
Aug 30th 2005
1
RE: Demonstration-
Aug 30th 2005
2
RE: Demonstration-
Sep 19th 2005
31
      I never scroll up
Sep 20th 2005
33
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Aug 30th 2005
3
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Aug 31st 2005
4
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Aug 31st 2005
5
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Aug 31st 2005
6
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 01st 2005
7
      RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 01st 2005
8
           RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 01st 2005
9
                RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 02nd 2005
10
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 02nd 2005
11
Boxed In
Sep 06th 2005
12
i like this idea. mine: Hallway To Heaven
Sep 06th 2005
13
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 07th 2005
14
up...
Sep 10th 2005
15
i'll try--coercion really
Sep 11th 2005
16
RE: i'll try--coercion really
Sep 12th 2005
17
it SHLDA read like this:
Sep 12th 2005
18
up.
Sep 14th 2005
19
The Others
Sep 15th 2005
20
RE: The Others
Sep 15th 2005
21
      RE: The Others
Sep 16th 2005
22
           RE: The Others
Sep 16th 2005
23
                So I pass the baton back...
Sep 16th 2005
24
Is that how the story ends?
Sep 19th 2005
25
no marijane...it'll take a slight twist tho'
Sep 19th 2005
26
RE: no marijane...it'll take a slight twist tho'
Sep 19th 2005
27
      RE: no marijane...it'll take a slight twist tho'
Sep 19th 2005
28
     
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 19th 2005
29
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 20th 2005
32
The Happiest Man Alive
Sep 22nd 2005
34
howz abouts we archives this???
Sep 23rd 2005
35
      I second that emotion...
Sep 23rd 2005
36
           can we get a third vote??
Sep 25th 2005
37
                RE: can we get a third vote??
Sep 25th 2005
39
downtown metro
Sep 25th 2005
38
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 25th 2005
40
soul music
Sep 26th 2005
41
up
Sep 26th 2005
42
RE: up
Sep 26th 2005
43
      Ressurected
Sep 29th 2005
44
rider eighteen
Oct 02nd 2005
45

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