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21. "RE: The Others"
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scrapin the tinge of tomorrows cinder and ashe, began to be habit forming for me.
My skin held the dark coal litter-marks, tightly,
waning in the autumn light peering through the window.

I see the "others"
they look just like me,
as they take beautiful grimm faces and dapper
minstrel smiles in front of their teeth
of malcontent.

A slender jane approached my portion of the boxcar
and laid her feelings down as a thinly
worn out quilt, giving her some comfort on the dusty floor.

She took out a real piece of inspiration
and placed it neatly on her fork and spied
brick-brown eyes around the room

She locked eyes with mine like railcars,
speeding to everywhere, no-time soon
and gestured for me to take a bite
of inspiration,

It tasted like my mommas meatloaf

I wiped my, now full soul, and asked this Jane girl
"Where do we go from here?" and if she knew if the
"Others" like us were coming too...

She said we'll stop when we get there,
but we aint stoppin no time soon.



Peace in, instead of Peace out

________________________________________
"With peace and love in my lungs,
I hold my breath until the Poet returns."

--Boxcarboys

  

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Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself [View all] , InGeniousPoet, Tue Aug-30-05 08:43 AM
 
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Demonstration-
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RE: Demonstration-
Aug 30th 2005
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RE: Demonstration-
Sep 19th 2005
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      I never scroll up
Sep 20th 2005
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RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Aug 30th 2005
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Aug 31st 2005
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Aug 31st 2005
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Aug 31st 2005
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RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 01st 2005
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      RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 01st 2005
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           RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 01st 2005
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                RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 02nd 2005
10
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 02nd 2005
11
Boxed In
Sep 06th 2005
12
i like this idea. mine: Hallway To Heaven
Sep 06th 2005
13
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 07th 2005
14
up...
Sep 10th 2005
15
i'll try--coercion really
Sep 11th 2005
16
RE: i'll try--coercion really
Sep 12th 2005
17
it SHLDA read like this:
Sep 12th 2005
18
up.
Sep 14th 2005
19
The Others
Sep 15th 2005
20
      RE: The Others
Sep 16th 2005
22
           RE: The Others
Sep 16th 2005
23
                So I pass the baton back...
Sep 16th 2005
24
Is that how the story ends?
Sep 19th 2005
25
no marijane...it'll take a slight twist tho'
Sep 19th 2005
26
RE: no marijane...it'll take a slight twist tho'
Sep 19th 2005
27
      RE: no marijane...it'll take a slight twist tho'
Sep 19th 2005
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      The Others
Sep 19th 2005
30
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 19th 2005
29
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 20th 2005
32
The Happiest Man Alive
Sep 22nd 2005
34
howz abouts we archives this???
Sep 23rd 2005
35
      I second that emotion...
Sep 23rd 2005
36
           can we get a third vote??
Sep 25th 2005
37
                RE: can we get a third vote??
Sep 25th 2005
39
downtown metro
Sep 25th 2005
38
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 25th 2005
40
soul music
Sep 26th 2005
41
up
Sep 26th 2005
42
RE: up
Sep 26th 2005
43
      Ressurected
Sep 29th 2005
44
rider eighteen
Oct 02nd 2005
45

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