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marijane
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22. "RE: The Others"
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>She said we'll stop when we get there,
>but we aint stoppin no time soon.


So we continue...
my eyes tightening the lock of his
straining not to transfer my transperant soul
I stretch
not simply to release the crick
but to casually undo the fasten-ation
of our stares
The "Business Report" is boring
but the inspiration stil tastes good.
my mouth waters for another bite
yet I am hesitent to feed into the
source of my feast.
He is still watching
not his eyes
but soul
his spirit lying in wait for mine to respond
both of us pen in hand
neither wanting to elude to our impatience
hearts
beat
to the rhythm of the wheels
As my pen terminates it's protest,
finally able to speak to it's long withheld beloved
dancing in a mad tango of adjectives and verbs
connecting indirectly to that observant spirit across the isle
the train stops
only for a moment but breaks the dance that is this piece.
I look up
as abruptly as the motion ended
almost in an ironic tandem,
the man has gone
relinquishing me back to reality
I am annoyingly releaved
a puff of smoke
as the exhaust lends a much needed release into the atmosphere

but it's not the end of the ride...

tag you're it.

_____________________________________
WITH CUZ (STACEY) GONE, I'LL NEVER REALLY BE HERE AGAIN

I swear I'm a marry an OKP


Nakia Genevieve are my middle names... Not my attempt to morph Phenom with Novembersgift... But...

  

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Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself [View all] , InGeniousPoet, Tue Aug-30-05 08:43 AM
 
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Demonstration-
Aug 30th 2005
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RE: Demonstration-
Aug 30th 2005
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RE: Demonstration-
Sep 19th 2005
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      I never scroll up
Sep 20th 2005
33
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Aug 30th 2005
3
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Aug 31st 2005
4
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Aug 31st 2005
5
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Aug 31st 2005
6
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 01st 2005
7
      RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 01st 2005
8
           RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 01st 2005
9
                RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 02nd 2005
10
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 02nd 2005
11
Boxed In
Sep 06th 2005
12
i like this idea. mine: Hallway To Heaven
Sep 06th 2005
13
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 07th 2005
14
up...
Sep 10th 2005
15
i'll try--coercion really
Sep 11th 2005
16
RE: i'll try--coercion really
Sep 12th 2005
17
it SHLDA read like this:
Sep 12th 2005
18
up.
Sep 14th 2005
19
The Others
Sep 15th 2005
20
RE: The Others
Sep 15th 2005
21
     
           RE: The Others
Sep 16th 2005
23
                So I pass the baton back...
Sep 16th 2005
24
Is that how the story ends?
Sep 19th 2005
25
no marijane...it'll take a slight twist tho'
Sep 19th 2005
26
RE: no marijane...it'll take a slight twist tho'
Sep 19th 2005
27
      RE: no marijane...it'll take a slight twist tho'
Sep 19th 2005
28
      The Others
Sep 19th 2005
30
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 19th 2005
29
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 20th 2005
32
The Happiest Man Alive
Sep 22nd 2005
34
howz abouts we archives this???
Sep 23rd 2005
35
      I second that emotion...
Sep 23rd 2005
36
           can we get a third vote??
Sep 25th 2005
37
                RE: can we get a third vote??
Sep 25th 2005
39
downtown metro
Sep 25th 2005
38
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 25th 2005
40
soul music
Sep 26th 2005
41
up
Sep 26th 2005
42
RE: up
Sep 26th 2005
43
      Ressurected
Sep 29th 2005
44
rider eighteen
Oct 02nd 2005
45

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