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12. "Boxed In"
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If any one man made it, why wouldn't he?
They were all worthy... of meeting the King
The Lord, the Savior, and the justice he brings
And right then he acknowledged the sting
of 38 eyes glaring against this mortal supreme
20 men emprisoned in this gas-chamber on wheels
Infinite hate, suspended in time, they don't know how it feels
It's been this way for 30 days- no water, no meals
But in this hostile knot, there was no frays, no kills
And through the lack of nutrition, they grew no weaker
If this were the real... life of ghetto children, then ofcourse they'd steal
But the impoverised couldn't afford a ticket to the destination
Recreation of lies took over, bitter, yet held together a nation
There was a litter, of Allie-Cats born into starvation
Scraggled cats actin like wildcats, known not for their peaceful acts

But nah... in their mind was a hate they thought divine
Not forge the check, respect the line
Of money they never crossed, if they were born into a loss
They'd never win
But then again, if you were poor, then were you forced to Sin?
But only the richest can afford, the alcohol of course...
But then they retort, "Yeah but they STEAL for theirs
If they so poor, how you think they got those Airs?"

But I'm juss takin that shit outta context.

  

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Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself [View all] , InGeniousPoet, Tue Aug-30-05 08:43 AM
 
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Demonstration-
Aug 30th 2005
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RE: Demonstration-
Aug 30th 2005
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RE: Demonstration-
Sep 19th 2005
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      I never scroll up
Sep 20th 2005
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RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Aug 30th 2005
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RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Aug 31st 2005
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RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Aug 31st 2005
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RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Aug 31st 2005
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RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 01st 2005
7
      RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 01st 2005
8
           RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 01st 2005
9
                RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 02nd 2005
10
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 02nd 2005
11
i like this idea. mine: Hallway To Heaven
Sep 06th 2005
13
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 07th 2005
14
up...
Sep 10th 2005
15
i'll try--coercion really
Sep 11th 2005
16
RE: i'll try--coercion really
Sep 12th 2005
17
it SHLDA read like this:
Sep 12th 2005
18
up.
Sep 14th 2005
19
The Others
Sep 15th 2005
20
RE: The Others
Sep 15th 2005
21
      RE: The Others
Sep 16th 2005
22
           RE: The Others
Sep 16th 2005
23
                So I pass the baton back...
Sep 16th 2005
24
Is that how the story ends?
Sep 19th 2005
25
no marijane...it'll take a slight twist tho'
Sep 19th 2005
26
RE: no marijane...it'll take a slight twist tho'
Sep 19th 2005
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      RE: no marijane...it'll take a slight twist tho'
Sep 19th 2005
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      The Others
Sep 19th 2005
30
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 19th 2005
29
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 20th 2005
32
The Happiest Man Alive
Sep 22nd 2005
34
howz abouts we archives this???
Sep 23rd 2005
35
      I second that emotion...
Sep 23rd 2005
36
           can we get a third vote??
Sep 25th 2005
37
                RE: can we get a third vote??
Sep 25th 2005
39
downtown metro
Sep 25th 2005
38
RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Sep 25th 2005
40
soul music
Sep 26th 2005
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up
Sep 26th 2005
42
RE: up
Sep 26th 2005
43
      Ressurected
Sep 29th 2005
44
rider eighteen
Oct 02nd 2005
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