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17409, RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself
Posted by Focus23, Wed Aug-31-05 11:52 PM
*Narrow your vision to the size of a boxcar.
40 feet long, 10 feet high ceilings.
*It holds only up to 20 people.
*What is happening on board?
*Add sights, smells, tastes, touch, and other ambience...



Railways run roughshod by
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Steel wheels squealing
Giving me that feeling of...

(("Where ever we're going, we're getting there fast."))
A stark stretch from the past trip that seemed to last forever.

Now, it's 'Now', and soon to be... 'When'
I drop hot poems n' flows in this boxcar of friends (silently, sshhh!)
Bending you're ear, while looking for cheers, in my imagination,shhhh!


sippin on Sangria while we agreein' upon the idea
to invite others to enjoy the delight of a symposium thea...

Ideas Terrific, no need to get specific,
Folks 'uppin' here are having FUN!
Never Bored.

((JUM JUM CHOO CHOO!!))

SSssuuuuuuuuuuuuUUU!

ALL ABOARD!!!!

Damn, we played through another stop,
n' got more folks adding to the train.
Painfully stashed away, my words RUN insane to DMC
n' Suddenly theres a Dj...