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BarTek
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8. "so.. "
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>No interest the cue digest the newer best
>Test don't confess progress the dire intellect
>No simpleness achieved, oneless grimoire selfishness
>calling on whatever too much attentiveness

i felt that these lines were kind of like a warm up.. verbal juggle in a way because it was really difficult for me to pick up the meaning and roll with it.. until...

>spaced out headed towards elective illusions
>base calling you your gone but telling them that it's
>the product of need, this manifest feeling
>of revelations made unto you your existence revealing
>night time,

nice..

you are saying something.. and its got a good flow.. nicely done. peace!

let's play ping pong ■

  

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Selfish grimoires [View all] , WILDOUT, Wed Nov-04-09 04:23 PM
 
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RE: Selfish grimoires
Nov 06th 2009
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Of Course U Know ...
Nov 06th 2009
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      Mom almost named me Harry
Nov 06th 2009
3
           we call our books of ritual
Nov 06th 2009
4
           RE: Mom almost named me Harry
Nov 08th 2009
6
RE: Selfish grimoires
Nov 07th 2009
5
you strike me as more of a battler at times
Nov 08th 2009
7
RE: so..
Nov 08th 2009
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