I agree with photo. Nice flow. Especially these lines...
night time, more thoughts grind time time to push out the filler and sit with your own mind day mirrors nightmares consuming energy fight fears till you're clear on what is what within
"How can you stand right in front of the truth and not see it?"
"OK...Who put a stop payment on my reality check?"
"Your age is one of my favorite things about you"~ Steve Martin