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83119, so..
Posted by BarTek, Sun Nov-08-09 02:40 PM
>No interest the cue digest the newer best
>Test don't confess progress the dire intellect
>No simpleness achieved, oneless grimoire selfishness
>calling on whatever too much attentiveness

i felt that these lines were kind of like a warm up.. verbal juggle in a way because it was really difficult for me to pick up the meaning and roll with it.. until...

>spaced out headed towards elective illusions
>base calling you your gone but telling them that it's
>the product of need, this manifest feeling
>of revelations made unto you your existence revealing
>night time,

nice..

you are saying something.. and its got a good flow.. nicely done. peace!