I know I'll prolly catch heat for this, but I got to call it like it is...
Hdub, the beginning of your joint was some serious filler. To the point I thought that you would lose from your first four bars alone. But...lol...as you got into it, I started ROLLIN.
I read both of Zin's verses. -deep sigh- Hot. Sharp punches. But ummm...not a grade A verse. Well maybe it was, if it was a stand-alone. But against Hdub's, ehhhhhh naw sun.
From this point on, he murked you:
"on OK stays, watching my posts for days,
while guys pleasure his wife- he's in a flow play phase
yo, go away!!!! your ass is forty years old!!!
your shortys tears scold- her cheeks-
Ďcause its clear you stroke keys not teets
a queer post fiending freak, absentee father
zin speaks and peeps for weeks
too geek to have to be bothered, by young skeet leaks
watching me compete - poppiní weak flubbed critiques,
net creep, deadbeat- heís crotching the dub beast
pour scotch- this tubís peaced!!- is he deadmeat?? ROGER!!
expired- as far as BKís concerned, youís a dodger
fired after this verse- a forced pension earned- codger!!
in retorts i got penchant to burn- pyres- ya ancient like urns- tired
face, it's ya turn- RETIRE!! new sire- i leap higher-
than clowns in single bounds- iím the best pound for pound,
in the ring you dying- the town crier sounds: DUBíS CROWNED!!!
zinís downed- and out, at the end of his ride
heís frowning now, wide- like 3rd iís behind
those two fucking???
oh my- yo- TWO WORLDS COLLIDE!!!!!!!!!
MY EYES!!!!! no joke- ya size churns my insides-
now got my victory insured like some f-d-iís--
C!- itís me you canít see, like your dick or your toes
plain to see D-U-B flows wití more kicks and more blows
sore Loes.- just LOSING.- i took your ďEĒ like a raver
go do us all a favor- take your boasts back to paper
meet ya post maker- got you begging worse than PBS
not trying to see me yet- up in threads Ė ďlike heads- please vote for DVS!Ē
i beat the ess- out of ya best- buster douglasíing vets
iímía be royalty- bet, just like a publishing check"
Yo I'm still laughing. I did NOT expect this. This was hotter than your first round joint.
"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought