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>Whateva:
>Had to pry ya chick lips off my shit before you had her >Taught her how to William Mark Felt before you bagged her
only reason I knew that was Deepthroat was cause I was gonna use that for a line, haha
>Cali nigga not brawlin is appaulin to me >Can't type enough periods to stall a defeat
got him on his written style, which was my main issue tryin to read his, its written like he's having an asthma attack
this was pretty solid the whole way through, no 'mo.
>Instant Axis:
>ice those with grills >whateva kid...lies show thru reels...you pleather wiz...i rip >thru shredder quick and lines is better writ...ya spine is >jelly split...i rhyme intelligent...
you had some nice runs flow-wise like here, I could actually follow it to a beat in parts like this, but you lost me in some other parts.
>im full of myself like the yankees and joe torre...ya >flows corny..i saw ya first round..you had sikstyle...who >couldnt win in that now...i just lost a vote..no sweat...
I didnt really like this part for some reason. not really sure why. nah for real though, I almost didn't vote cause of this line haha, but fuck that. I like how you come off with confidence in lines like this, and you got some good imagery too, just hard to follow your flow, prob easier for people who know you.
vizzote 4 Whateva "I walk around with sick styles, sippin on cristal, my whole cliques wild, I'm rich pal no more sticks I'm making hits now... when I recite you takin hours to write, so if you fight just tell ya man what kinda flowers you like" -Big L
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