Hdub:
Why oh why didn't you switch these lines around:

"C!- it’s me you can’t see, like your dick or your toes
plain to see D-U-B flows wit’ more kicks and more blows"

Your verse was solid, but not a lot of head spinning lyrics.
Your rhyme scheme is developing, but I think it can get in the way if not perfected. Sometimes all you really need is a good punch. All around great effort though.

Zin:
Nice strong concise output. Very little wasted words. Some of the rhymes were a stretch: Lyrics don't rhyme with field fence or gifted and so on.

Should have left this out:

"Hhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!"

This is real tough, but I'm a sucker for shit like this:

"I’m a take it as herb to the second power
Or hermaphrodite with double the genitals
Hope for double the mentals
Cause the basic ass beats you spit writtens to
Will get you hemmed up and hacked … in this lyrical physical
Double the Help from … Zin twisting you …
Yukon Mag… dissing him would have to be a double issue …
Cause them Horrible Hideous writtens …hold no semblance of a real spitters verbitch "

That's sickening.


Vote: Zin

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