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but this should be upped anyway so.... here it is again *smile*
I really like the audio (the poem on its own legs is very good as well). Hearing a piece read gives an energy to it that often can be lost in translation when simply viewed. You get more of the authors intent as in, whether a piece is coming from an air of regret, or peace, or confusion etc.
I like your voice, but the beginning and middle sound a bit nasal/whiny (not in an ugly way, more so flirty...the sound I'd expect for a sex/romantic love poem) towards the end your voice picks up bass and that sound seems fitting for the topic.
Other than that, practice and polish make perfect, but this is a very good first recording, and I can't wait to hear more from you! And though I wasn't there to hear the competition, I think I'll have to agree with David, you were robbed, because you have a beautiful voice/vibe/art so you should have been first, not second place. Next time!
Peace sister girl, enjoy Mee-ah-mee. Hasta luego.
_________ to retain my illusion of sanity ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Plan to be , I will! need to learn to truly love our .
_______closing remarks______
" To be nobody but yourself-- in a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you everybody else-- means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and to never stop fighting.-- E.E. Cummings"
"There is nothing nobler or more admirable than when two people who see eye to eye keep house as husband and wife, confounding their enemies and delighting their friends" ---Homer, The Odyssey
"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent"--- E. Roosevelt
"Love is anterior to life posterior to death Initial of creation, and the exponent of breath"--Emily Dickenson
Mystic: One who experiences mystical union, or direct communion with God or Ulitmate reality.
Elixir: A substance held capable of prolonging life indefinitely (also panacea) a sweetened, alcoholic, medicinal solution... I am
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