1254, RE: for red sea babies. Posted by Otto, Sun Jan-02-05 04:21 PM
because many times i’ve felt that same claustrophobic feeling between these walls of womanhood crashing down against me i know that fleeting moment when life and death pull up chairs at your tea party one has the sugar and one has the spoon i’ve been there, deciding on whether to stay or leave my mark scribbled on steamy mirrors i ain’t mad at you for leaving sometimes leaving is the best thing to do
especially when life wasn’t ready for you & i wasn’t ready for you.
...i like it, but i dont think its appropriate for a baby's tongue to touch your uterus...or you know, whatever you said...that doesnt sit well in me for some reason...but i LOVE absolutely...LOVE the rest of the poem....
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