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1240, amazing
Posted by , Tue Dec-14-04 07:42 PM
i love this piece...

read and reread it. my favorite line:

my heartbeat not magnificent enough for you to dance to

i truly enjoy the subtlety with which you conveyed both the despair and the relief...& i wasn't ready for you yet.

thanks for the good read.

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