1229, *shrugs* Posted by mindful, Mon Dec-13-04 01:13 PM
i am not too sure of what to make of... the focal point or meaning...
but i got emotionally involved reading these lines:
you would fuck up gravity alabama's red clay would be too jealous of you and the stars would give up their place in fear that they couldn't compare to you and the sky would fall closer to the ground just to be next to you baby ain't nobody got to believe like i do because i know
life wasn’t ready for you yet & i wasn’t ready for you yet
my womb was too small of a world this fluid in me not sweet enough for your tongue my heartbeat not maginceift enough for you to dance to my uterus too possessive and constricting for you to enter thru and i ain’t mad at you because many times i’ve felt that same claustrophobic feeling between these walls of womanhood crashing down against me
and i love when i can "feel" what i'm reading. i love when i can sit titely in my seat and get all sad, like the world is coming down on me when reading something...
u do this very well... involve ur readers. very well... Peace~
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