Honestly you did yourself in. Six more bars of that and you had him. The last line should locked away in a vault somewhere never to light of day. That's not a finisher.
Miracleric:
The last verse hit me seconds after I read it which made it all the more sweet. Solid output. Little wasted words and stinging punches. Your flow is hard to follow though. Your cadence turns on and off.
Vote: MiracleRic
*************************************** "Science" and Religion are the two most dangerous weapons of ideology. See holocaust.
Why do "scientists" constantly produce statistics based on "race", a social construct?