Ya verse was a solid off the top jawn, but it was hellalong and lacked hard hitting punches. I felt like you were overcompensating for lack of solid, well formulated punchlines. Lot of wasted lines. With that said, your verse could have steamrolled through many of us, but I seriously believe you are facing this tourney's champ.
Prolif:
Once again. Not to sound like a dick-rider, but pound for pound, I don't think anyone in the tourney is seeing you. I don't see a lot of unnecessary wordage, entire sentences rhyme and still make a lot of sense. The punches are clever and hilarious. Ya cadence can be just a tad bit off at times:
"wit' Lif u can't spar - leave a smear through ya' thoughts!/ privileged just to face me par, u only here by default!/"
This was about four syllables off (and it can be depending on word usage). Remove "just" and you save your cadence without sacrificing a punch. Little edits like that IMO make an better flow.
Vote: Prolif.
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Why do "scientists" constantly produce statistics based on "race", a social construct?