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70. "hdub VS Zin"
In response to In response to 67


  

          

I know I'll prolly catch heat for this, but I got to call it like it is...

Hdub, the beginning of your joint was some serious filler. To the point I thought that you would lose from your first four bars alone. But...lol...as you got into it, I started ROLLIN.

I read both of Zin's verses. -deep sigh- Hot. Sharp punches. But ummm...not a grade A verse. Well maybe it was, if it was a stand-alone. But against Hdub's, ehhhhhh naw sun.

From this point on, he murked you:

"on OK stays, watching my posts for days,
while guys pleasure his wife- he's in a flow play phase
yo, go away!!!! your ass is forty years old!!!
your shortys tears scold- her cheeks-
Ďcause its clear you stroke keys not teets
a queer post fiending freak, absentee father
zin speaks and peeps for weeks
too geek to have to be bothered, by young skeet leaks
watching me compete - poppiní weak flubbed critiques,
net creep, deadbeat- heís crotching the dub beast
pour scotch- this tubís peaced!!- is he deadmeat?? ROGER!!
expired- as far as BKís concerned, youís a dodger
fired after this verse- a forced pension earned- codger!!
in retorts i got penchant to burn- pyres- ya ancient like urns- tired
face, it's ya turn- RETIRE!! new sire- i leap higher-
than clowns in single bounds- iím the best pound for pound,
in the ring you dying- the town crier sounds: DUBíS CROWNED!!!
zinís downed- and out, at the end of his ride
heís frowning now, wide- like 3rd iís behind
those two fucking???
oh my- yo- TWO WORLDS COLLIDE!!!!!!!!!
MY EYES!!!!! no joke- ya size churns my insides-
now got my victory insured like some f-d-iís--
C!- itís me you canít see, like your dick or your toes
plain to see D-U-B flows wití more kicks and more blows
sore Loes.- just LOSING.- i took your ďEĒ like a raver
go do us all a favor- take your boasts back to paper
meet ya post maker- got you begging worse than PBS
not trying to see me yet- up in threads Ė ďlike heads- please vote for DVS!Ē
i beat the ess- out of ya best- buster douglasíing vets
iímía be royalty- bet, just like a publishing check"

Yo I'm still laughing. I did NOT expect this. This was hotter than your first round joint.

Vote: Hdub

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

  

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King O' Da Ring Tourney III (Round 2) [View all] , KnowOne, Wed Jun-15-05 10:21 AM
 
Subject Author Message Date ID
Ish' talk / questions / suggestions/ and other random ish'.
Jun 13th 2005
1
HAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jun 13th 2005
2
cossizzle brizzles
Jun 13th 2005
3
check ya inbox
Jun 13th 2005
7
"Just as in round one match-ups were randomly chosen"
Jun 13th 2005
4
      naw it was random cuz I actually.....
Jun 13th 2005
5
           RE: naw it was random cuz I actually.....
Jun 13th 2005
8
Dub my verse is in
Jun 13th 2005
6
RE: Dub my verse is in
Jun 14th 2005
18
      RE: Dub my verse is in
Jun 14th 2005
27
           u mad?
Jun 14th 2005
37
verse is in and i know ima win
Jun 14th 2005
9
Whateva vs Instant Axis
Jun 14th 2005
10
Whateva vs Instant Axis
Jun 14th 2005
11
RE: Whateva vs Instant Axis
Jun 14th 2005
12
**abstain...
Jun 14th 2005
15
you dont read very well H Dub
Jun 14th 2005
41
      have i gone anywhere???
Jun 14th 2005
43
           wait my turn
Jun 14th 2005
45
                ^^^if this right here....
Jun 14th 2005
47
RE: Whateva vs Instant Axis
Jun 14th 2005
16
RE: Whateva vs Instant Axis
Jun 14th 2005
28
RE: Whateva vs Instant Axis
Jun 14th 2005
30
      just cause they boys...
Jun 14th 2005
38
im undecided but by the time i break shit down i'll know
Jun 14th 2005
32
RE: Whateva vs Instant Axis
Jun 14th 2005
34
RE: Whateva vs Instant Axis
Jun 14th 2005
40
fuck it im voting....
Jun 14th 2005
44
AYO KNOW ONE
Jun 14th 2005
46
      RE: AYO KNOW ONE
Jun 14th 2005
48
      RE: ax, come on now...
Jun 14th 2005
49
      Dead wrong homie...
Jun 14th 2005
51
      fuck it...ima be around to be around
Jun 15th 2005
64
           drama queen ^^^
Jun 15th 2005
65
i've stayed away from this tournament
Jun 14th 2005
52
Analytical Skills ...
Jun 15th 2005
104
Respect..
Jun 15th 2005
124
Ax by a hair
Jun 14th 2005
55
RE: Ax by a hair
Jun 14th 2005
56
uuhhh..errr...That was meant to be "blows"..LOL
Jun 14th 2005
57
blow = dope = herione
Jun 14th 2005
58
      heroin isnt blow coke is...
Jun 14th 2005
59
      oops
Jun 14th 2005
61
           RE: oops
Jun 14th 2005
62
           Lmao
Jun 15th 2005
63
      RE: blow = dope = herione
Jun 14th 2005
60
      cocaine... as in the movie Blow starring Johnny Depp
Jun 15th 2005
71
           Thanks yo..
Jun 15th 2005
74
Ax
Jun 15th 2005
66
dat nigga frak all day....
Jun 16th 2005
130
RE: Whateva vs Instant Axis
Jun 18th 2005
136
MCee VS Def 1
Jun 14th 2005
13
MCee VS Def 1
Jun 14th 2005
14
RE: MCee VS Def 1
Jun 14th 2005
17
RE: MCee VS Def 1
Jun 14th 2005
19
exhibit A
Jun 14th 2005
20
      Yooooooooooooooo
Jun 14th 2005
22
           RE: Yooooooooooooooo
Jun 14th 2005
23
RE: MCee VS Def 1
Jun 14th 2005
21
RE: MCee VS Def 1
Jun 14th 2005
24
      RE: MCee VS Def 1
Jun 14th 2005
25
           The reasons I allowed it....
Jun 14th 2005
31
                RE: The reasons I allowed it....
Jun 14th 2005
36
i dont think he deserves a dq
Jun 14th 2005
26
MCee vs Def 1: Tie
Jun 14th 2005
29
i'ma take mcee
Jun 14th 2005
33
RE: MCee VS Def 1
Jun 14th 2005
35
RE: MCee VS Def 1
Jun 14th 2005
39
Vote: MCee
Jun 15th 2005
80
Def1 n/m
Jun 14th 2005
42
RE: MCee wit the BarTek killer verse, ha ha haaaa!
Jun 14th 2005
50
lyric-wise: Def1. punch-wise: MCee
Jun 14th 2005
53
neither should advance, def 1 by default
Jun 14th 2005
54
*Hmmmmmmm*
Jun 15th 2005
105
Def 1 took this shit
Jun 15th 2005
122
RE: MCee VS Def 1
Jun 18th 2005
137
hdub VS Zin
Jun 15th 2005
67
RE: hdub VS Zin
Jun 15th 2005
68
i gotta cosign here
Jun 15th 2005
92
This is close..
Jun 15th 2005
72
don't count this vote, but i say hdub takes it
Jun 15th 2005
73
Vote: Zin
Jun 15th 2005
82
my badd zin for postin the wrong verse...
Jun 15th 2005
75
Zin
Jun 15th 2005
76
RE: hdub VS Zin
Jun 15th 2005
100
RE: hdub VS Zin
Jun 15th 2005
108
c'mon man....i ain't even gonna say shit
Jun 15th 2005
112
RE: hdub VS Zin
Jun 15th 2005
118
Zin
Jun 15th 2005
125
RE: Zin
Jun 16th 2005
129
      RE: Zin
Jun 18th 2005
138
My 2 cents........
Jun 16th 2005
133
nuke vs Prolif
Jun 15th 2005
77
Nuke vs Prolif
Jun 15th 2005
81
Vote: Prolif
Jun 15th 2005
85
cosign...Prolif
Jun 15th 2005
95
Prolif
Jun 15th 2005
96
RE: nuke vs Prolif
Jun 15th 2005
101
RE: nuke vs Prolif
Jun 15th 2005
106
*Sheeesh*
Jun 15th 2005
111
Analysis:
Jun 15th 2005
115
Prolif obliterated him
Jun 15th 2005
119
RE: nuke vs Prolif
Jun 15th 2005
127
RE: nuke vs Prolif
Jun 16th 2005
134
prolif won
Jun 18th 2005
139
MiracleRic vs Rajeniro
Jun 15th 2005
78
RE: MiracleRic vs Rajeniro
Jun 15th 2005
84
Vote: Rajeniro
Jun 15th 2005
87
MiracleRic vs Rajeniro
Jun 15th 2005
91
co-sign on this...
Jun 15th 2005
110
i hate making excuses but work i pulled 12 hr shifts mon. and tues.
Jun 18th 2005
145
MiracleRic
Jun 15th 2005
97
true true , and he did some name dropping on that one
Jun 19th 2005
147
RE: MiracleRic vs Rajeniro
Jun 15th 2005
102
ric...
Jun 15th 2005
107
Well Shitt!!!
Jun 15th 2005
113
RE: MiracleRic vs Rajeniro
Jun 15th 2005
116
i agree
Jun 16th 2005
131
true last line was not a finisher, i was out of time inboxed it at 9:30 ...
Jun 18th 2005
146
vote=Ric
Jun 18th 2005
140
close, imma go with Rajeniro757
Jun 18th 2005
144
Biohazard vs southernboy_423
Jun 15th 2005
79
RE: Biohazard vs southernboy_423
Jun 15th 2005
83
Vote: Southernboy_423
Jun 15th 2005
89
i read dub's exhibit A shit
Jun 15th 2005
90
      i agree Southernboy
Jun 15th 2005
98
      i agree Southernboy
Jun 15th 2005
99
           does Zin get 2 votes cuz he's a bigger person?
Jun 15th 2005
123
Biohazard
Jun 15th 2005
86
RE: Biohazard vs southernboy_423
Jun 15th 2005
88
Biohazard vs southernboy_423
Jun 15th 2005
93
Biohazard
Jun 15th 2005
94
RE: Biohazard vs southernboy_423
Jun 15th 2005
103
biohazard....
Jun 15th 2005
109
Ewwwwwwww ...
Jun 15th 2005
114
when Photo says this, you KNOW you gotta step ya game up
Jun 15th 2005
121
RE: Ewwwwwwww ...
Jun 16th 2005
128
      RE: Ewwwwwwww ...
Jun 16th 2005
132
           RE: Ewwwwwwww ...
Jun 17th 2005
135
RE: Biohazard vs southernboy_423
Jun 15th 2005
117
i dig!
Jun 15th 2005
126
and the two whitest battle rappers are...
Jun 15th 2005
120
vote:bio
Jun 18th 2005
141
      RE: vote:bio
Jun 18th 2005
142
           RE: vote:bio
Jun 18th 2005
143
                RE: vote:bio
Jun 19th 2005
148
Round 2 Results....
Jun 20th 2005
149

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