I know I'll prolly catch heat for this, but I got to call it like it is...
Hdub, the beginning of your joint was some serious filler. To the point I thought that you would lose from your first four bars alone. But...lol...as you got into it, I started ROLLIN.
I read both of Zin's verses. -deep sigh- Hot. Sharp punches. But ummm...not a grade A verse. Well maybe it was, if it was a stand-alone. But against Hdub's, ehhhhhh naw sun.
From this point on, he murked you:
"on OK stays, watching my posts for days, while guys pleasure his wife- he's in a flow play phase yo, go away!!!! your ass is forty years old!!! your shortys tears scold- her cheeks- Ďcause its clear you stroke keys not teets a queer post fiending freak, absentee father zin speaks and peeps for weeks too geek to have to be bothered, by young skeet leaks watching me compete - poppiní weak flubbed critiques, net creep, deadbeat- heís crotching the dub beast pour scotch- this tubís peaced!!- is he deadmeat?? ROGER!! expired- as far as BKís concerned, youís a dodger fired after this verse- a forced pension earned- codger!! in retorts i got penchant to burn- pyres- ya ancient like urns- tired face, it's ya turn- RETIRE!! new sire- i leap higher- than clowns in single bounds- iím the best pound for pound, in the ring you dying- the town crier sounds: DUBíS CROWNED!!! zinís downed- and out, at the end of his ride heís frowning now, wide- like 3rd iís behind those two fucking??? oh my- yo- TWO WORLDS COLLIDE!!!!!!!!! MY EYES!!!!! no joke- ya size churns my insides- now got my victory insured like some f-d-iís-- C!- itís me you canít see, like your dick or your toes plain to see D-U-B flows wití more kicks and more blows sore Loes.- just LOSING.- i took your ďEĒ like a raver go do us all a favor- take your boasts back to paper meet ya post maker- got you begging worse than PBS not trying to see me yet- up in threads Ė ďlike heads- please vote for DVS!Ē i beat the ess- out of ya best- buster douglasíing vets iímía be royalty- bet, just like a publishing check"
Yo I'm still laughing. I did NOT expect this. This was hotter than your first round joint.
"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought