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AidenWaves
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"aria"
Fri Jul-25-08 02:00 PM by AidenWaves

  

          

she comes to me
be it day or night
and i awake from dreams of bliss or horror
solely to attend to her needs

i dress her wounds
provide nourishment
after those who would claim love ravage
and even when she's ravenous
i remain loyal to the bitter end

now, when i was a child
she would comfort me
bringin me ice cream sundaes and chocolate candy
she would speak truth and make me cry
or uplift my spirit into flight

we would praise and amen in church
and after choir rehearsal we'd dance and flirt
she's always been there for me
aria harmony melody
in 4/4 or marching theme

and though right now she doesn't always act right
all on the radio actin like all she wants to do is fuck and fight
i made a commitment to stay by her side
so i write
hoping to remind her
of where she used to reside



Aiden Waves, the cleansing fire

"just as the pureness of honey can sanctify my sins, i say let ur love blow in the wind...." -me!

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: aria
Jul 25th 2008
1
RE: aria
Jul 26th 2008
2
      RE: aria
Jul 26th 2008
4
i used to love h.e.r. tooo
Jul 26th 2008
3
RE: i used to love h.e.r. tooo
Jul 31st 2008
6
Lovely Melody ....
Jul 28th 2008
5
RE: Lovely Melody ....
Jul 31st 2008
7
RE: aria
Jul 31st 2008
8
RE: aria
Aug 02nd 2008
11
you showed up here
Aug 01st 2008
9
RE: you showed up here
Aug 02nd 2008
12
heart-wrenching and yet...
Aug 02nd 2008
10
RE: heart-wrenching and yet...
Aug 02nd 2008
13

ASIEM
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Fri Jul-25-08 05:27 PM

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1. "RE: aria"
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this really has me interested in just who aria is? may we have more scriptions to enjoy finding her that she may again find you anew?

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




www.myspace.com/asiem61

  

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AidenWaves
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Sat Jul-26-08 06:57 AM

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2. "RE: aria"
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look up aria in the dictionary and u'll be pleasantly surprised.

Aiden Waves, the cleansing fire

"just as the pureness of honey can sanctify my sins, i say let ur love blow in the wind...." -me!

  

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ASIEM
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4. "RE: aria"
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oh ok nice spin it was when you spoke of "her" in the past tense that captured my attention but yeh she really has taken on so many voices now dayz i hardly recognize just how we used to syncopate then again there are times when i truly can relate to her new grind so...she is as she expresses herself thanks

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




www.myspace.com/asiem61

  

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jayare214
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Sat Jul-26-08 01:36 PM

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3. "i used to love h.e.r. tooo"
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n/m

still do really...

my music group:
http://www.facebook.com/beataroundabush
http://www.lastfm.com/beataroundabush
http://www.reverbnation.com/beataroundabush
http://www.myspace.com/beataroundabush

My beats:
www.myspace.com/jayarejohnson

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/no

  

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AidenWaves
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Thu Jul-31-08 12:53 PM

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6. "RE: i used to love h.e.r. tooo"
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and i always will! te siento mucho!

Aiden Waves, the cleansing fire

"just as the pureness of honey can sanctify my sins, i say let ur love blow in the wind...." -me!

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Mon Jul-28-08 12:35 AM

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5. "Lovely Melody ...."
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When I think of arias, I think of Opera (for some reason) -- I guess it's subliminal training from childhood & private school -- But I like the ~twist~ you put on this perspective -- *Yuuup* --


It's good to see you flippin' words like pancakes .... again!


More syrup please --


And WELCOME BACK!





A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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AidenWaves
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7. "RE: Lovely Melody ...."
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got some waffles if u want too! thanks mama. and it's good to be back.

Aiden Waves, the cleansing fire

"just as the pureness of honey can sanctify my sins, i say let ur love blow in the wind...." -me!

  

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empro
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Thu Jul-31-08 06:13 PM

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8. "RE: aria"
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what up man, good to see you back on here blessing the board with your words.

Keep pen'in...

Peace

  

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AidenWaves
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11. "RE: aria"
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i know! it's good to be home. been in the lab, now workin on otha ish. but i gotta keep it grounded here. thanx 4 da love.

Aiden Waves, the cleansing fire

"just as the pureness of honey can sanctify my sins, i say let ur love blow in the wind...." -me!

  

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mindful
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9. "you showed up here"
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now, when i was a child
she would comfort me
bringin me ice cream sundaes and chocolate candy
she would speak truth and make me cry
or uplift my spirit into flight

we would praise and amen in church
and after choir rehearsal we'd dance and flirt
she's always been there for me
aria harmony melody
in 4/4 or marching theme

and this was a moving piece; nice, even tone... good visuals too. good work, man.

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AidenWaves
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12. "RE: you showed up here"
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thanx alot! i've been recording over the past 4 months and it's made me realize how much music really means to me. though others abuse her, i'm still the one carressing her in hopes that she'll keep carressing me back. i reall appreciate the love. it means alot.

Aiden Waves, the cleansing fire

"just as the pureness of honey can sanctify my sins, i say let ur love blow in the wind...." -me!

  

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southqueens
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Sat Aug-02-08 11:17 AM

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10. "heart-wrenching and yet..."
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this is so filled with hope and true meaning...i love this piece.

the new sig-

"When you know that the life and spirit of others depend on your life and spirit, you have no right to be afraid - even when you are terribly afraid."

-Sembene Ousmane

  

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AidenWaves
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13. "RE: heart-wrenching and yet..."
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WOW! all of u's guys are tryna pring the punk outta me. got me all sentimental and ish. thanks for the love. it's much appreciated. just hope my music does the world some good. thanks again!

Aiden Waves, the cleansing fire

"just as the pureness of honey can sanctify my sins, i say let ur love blow in the wind...." -me!

  

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