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75931, aria
Posted by AidenWaves, Fri Jul-25-08 01:33 PM
she comes to me
be it day or night
and i awake from dreams of bliss or horror
solely to attend to her needs

i dress her wounds
provide nourishment
after those who would claim love ravage
and even when she's ravenous
i remain loyal to the bitter end

now, when i was a child
she would comfort me
bringin me ice cream sundaes and chocolate candy
she would speak truth and make me cry
or uplift my spirit into flight

we would praise and amen in church
and after choir rehearsal we'd dance and flirt
she's always been there for me
aria harmony melody
in 4/4 or marching theme

and though right now she doesn't always act right
all on the radio actin like all she wants to do is fuck and fight
i made a commitment to stay by her side
so i write
hoping to remind her
of where she used to reside



75935, RE: aria
Posted by ASIEM, Fri Jul-25-08 05:27 PM
this really has me interested in just who aria is? may we have more scriptions to enjoy finding her that she may again find you anew?
75941, RE: aria
Posted by AidenWaves, Sat Jul-26-08 06:57 AM
look up aria in the dictionary and u'll be pleasantly surprised.

75946, RE: aria
Posted by ASIEM, Sat Jul-26-08 04:38 PM
oh ok nice spin it was when you spoke of "her" in the past tense that captured my attention but yeh she really has taken on so many voices now dayz i hardly recognize just how we used to syncopate then again there are times when i truly can relate to her new grind so...she is as she expresses herself thanks
75944, i used to love h.e.r. tooo
Posted by jayare214, Sat Jul-26-08 01:36 PM
n/m

still do really...
76017, RE: i used to love h.e.r. tooo
Posted by AidenWaves, Thu Jul-31-08 12:53 PM
and i always will! te siento mucho!

75962, Lovely Melody ....
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Mon Jul-28-08 12:35 AM
When I think of arias, I think of Opera (for some reason) -- I guess it's subliminal training from childhood & private school -- But I like the ~twist~ you put on this perspective -- *Yuuup* -- :D


It's good to see you flippin' words like pancakes .... again!


More syrup please -- :9


And WELCOME BACK!





76018, RE: Lovely Melody ....
Posted by AidenWaves, Thu Jul-31-08 12:54 PM
got some waffles if u want too! thanks mama. and it's good to be back.
76027, RE: aria
Posted by empro, Thu Jul-31-08 06:13 PM
what up man, good to see you back on here blessing the board with your words.

Keep pen'in...

Peace
76069, RE: aria
Posted by AidenWaves, Sat Aug-02-08 01:48 PM
i know! it's good to be home. been in the lab, now workin on otha ish. but i gotta keep it grounded here. thanx 4 da love.
76060, you showed up here
Posted by mindful, Fri Aug-01-08 09:50 PM
now, when i was a child
she would comfort me
bringin me ice cream sundaes and chocolate candy
she would speak truth and make me cry
or uplift my spirit into flight

we would praise and amen in church
and after choir rehearsal we'd dance and flirt
she's always been there for me
aria harmony melody
in 4/4 or marching theme

and this was a moving piece; nice, even tone... good visuals too. good work, man.

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76070, RE: you showed up here
Posted by AidenWaves, Sat Aug-02-08 01:52 PM
thanx alot! i've been recording over the past 4 months and it's made me realize how much music really means to me. though others abuse her, i'm still the one carressing her in hopes that she'll keep carressing me back. i reall appreciate the love. it means alot.

76064, heart-wrenching and yet...
Posted by southqueens, Sat Aug-02-08 11:17 AM
this is so filled with hope and true meaning...i love this piece.
76071, RE: heart-wrenching and yet...
Posted by AidenWaves, Sat Aug-02-08 01:55 PM
WOW! all of u's guys are tryna pring the punk outta me. got me all sentimental and ish. thanks for the love. it's much appreciated. just hope my music does the world some good. thanks again!