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marijane
Member since Feb 26th 2004
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Wed Oct-11-06 02:20 PM

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"Missing the train (a rememberance of old)"


  

          

I remember some time back the entire Freestyle board collabed on one of my favorite pieces about a train. I'd like to start a new story. Please add on.


Puritan cans of infamel slide over her back in a canvas wrap

She's open not to the world really but just enough to see cause the zipper cracked a little

her Lillymae tatto is legendary in these parts

She slips into Mohammad's eager to pawn her viddles

hoping her hood rep will not be identifiable

As she passes the sack from her back to the worn laminate

she feels a cold rough hand on her tattoed wrist...(add on)



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WITH CUZ (STACEY) GONE, I'LL NEVER REALLY BE HERE AGAIN

I swear I'm a marry an OKP


Nakia Genevieve are my middle names... Not my attempt to morph Phenom with Novembersgift... But...

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: Nice 2 see u back,
Oct 11th 2006
1
Ha! Thank you love
Oct 12th 2006
2

ak_reborn
Member since Sep 24th 2005
1660 posts
Wed Oct-11-06 06:02 PM

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1. "RE: Nice 2 see u back,"
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those lines were nice,i cant add on though,
i cant think of anythin.

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Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

  

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marijane
Member since Feb 26th 2004
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Thu Oct-12-06 11:59 AM

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2. "Ha! Thank you love"
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Where have all the flowers gone? Cause it seems like the bleekness of the winter fairy has taken over. when do we creatively blossom? Keep Shining!



www.myspace.com/marijaneraps

_____________________________________
WITH CUZ (STACEY) GONE, I'LL NEVER REALLY BE HERE AGAIN

I swear I'm a marry an OKP


Nakia Genevieve are my middle names... Not my attempt to morph Phenom with Novembersgift... But...

  

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