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Topic subjectMissing the train (a rememberance of old)
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61075, Missing the train (a rememberance of old)
Posted by marijane, Wed Oct-11-06 02:20 PM
I remember some time back the entire Freestyle board collabed on one of my favorite pieces about a train. I'd like to start a new story. Please add on.

Puritan cans of infamel slide over her back in a canvas wrap

She's open not to the world really but just enough to see cause the zipper cracked a little

her Lillymae tatto is legendary in these parts

She slips into Mohammad's eager to pawn her viddles

hoping her hood rep will not be identifiable

As she passes the sack from her back to the worn laminate

she feels a cold rough hand on her tattoed wrist...(add on)

61085, RE: Nice 2 see u back,
Posted by ak_reborn, Wed Oct-11-06 06:02 PM

those lines were nice,i cant add on though,
i cant think of anythin.
61111, Ha! Thank you love
Posted by marijane, Thu Oct-12-06 11:59 AM
Where have all the flowers gone? Cause it seems like the bleekness of the winter fairy has taken over. when do we creatively blossom? Keep Shining!