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Sepia Ink
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"for women who bleed...(Add On)"


  

          

This is a little exercise in quotes. We all write poems of all kinds, and I’d like to see more original quotes.

The topic is “Women” (men feel free to join in with an original quote on “women” as well), I’ll start, and you follow with your original quote pertaining to women….

*have fun*
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“I bleed out life sustaining serum which perpetuates your existence; so, you’ll excuse me if my mood swings once a month.”



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i am not simply a human being...i am a wom(b)an, being human.

  

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RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)
Feb 15th 2005
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wow
Feb 15th 2005
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      RE: wow
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           RE: wow
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24-hour woman
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RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)
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.
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      RE: .
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my womb is a prophet
Feb 16th 2005
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Visuals for the first quote
Feb 16th 2005
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i think you are the only muthafucka bleedin
Feb 16th 2005
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RE: Visuals for the first quote
Feb 16th 2005
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why haven't you looked at my newest pieces?
Feb 16th 2005
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i like the visuals nm
Feb 16th 2005
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RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)
Feb 16th 2005
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RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)
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RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)
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RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)
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*taps microphone*
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RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)
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"."
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RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)
Feb 20th 2005
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RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)
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RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)
Feb 21st 2005
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~ WeMoon ~
Feb 22nd 2005
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archive - 1st request
Feb 22nd 2005
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I Second That "ARCHIVE" Request --
Feb 24th 2005
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      Retention: Recommended
Feb 24th 2005
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           This is inspiring!
Feb 24th 2005
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                No place to go but
Feb 24th 2005
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                     holding for a week...
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Intrepid Vixen
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1. "RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)"
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"I bleed, not cherry red dangling from stems, but love; the undefinable color of life."

~*~
Beauty is in my ear
I sketch beautiful
rhythms with a pen
canvassing
my thoughts
artfully articulated
into harmonies of
words
~*~ KSB ~*~

"My fear is my only courage."
Bob Marley

~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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Sepia Ink
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2. "wow"
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"the undefinable color of life"

I love that!

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i am not simply a human being...i am a womban, being human.

  

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Intrepid Vixen
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3. "RE: wow"
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Thank you! I was just trying dig into the same vibe as yours because that was a beautiful and true sentiment.

~*~
Beauty is in my ear
I sketch beautiful
rhythms with a pen
canvassing
my thoughts
artfully articulated
into harmonies of
words
~*~ KSB ~*~

"My fear is my only courage."
Bob Marley

~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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chideria
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4. "RE: wow"
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^dope, very.

"I bleed monthly, in order to release the negativity that has swollen in my womb; I've learned to devour the antagonist and release him in crimson colored streams- of passion."

-------- yuh ---------

  

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the perfect mistake
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5. "24-hour woman"
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the beauty of a woman is found in the pit of her soul. she bleeds new life into this world, forever changing; but always remaining the same.





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faith is demonstrated
belief. ©mike holt

  

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6. "RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)"
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An invisible flow drains from the pain of past mistakes – Bleeding, while receding on “Time” -- Floating on Wisdom’s lakes – I bleed in increments … Rationing for survival!

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Sepia Ink
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7. "."
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"I bleed in increments … Rationing for survival"

that is hot! I want to quote you, can i, can i? *lol*

how you been girl?

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10. "RE: ."
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>I want to quote you, can i, can i? *lol*

Quote away, my sistah -- *smiles*

You're more than welcome to use any of my insane sentiments, thoughts or ideas!

You *know* you mah gyrl, right? -- ;^)

Check your INBOX later aaiight?

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Sepia Ink
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8. "my womb is a prophet"
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The future absorbs vermilion nectar from our centers while in incubus; our prophetic wombs tell tale of tomorrow.



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i am not simply a human being...i am a womban, being human.

  

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Sepia Ink
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9. "Visuals for the first quote"
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my white panties have red



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11. "i think you are the only muthafucka bleedin"
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http://soundcloud.com/phyziks

"Furthermore, the only high that I am feeling right now is my natural magnificence."-BarTek while face down in an 8-ball.

  

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12. "RE: Visuals for the first quote"
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There's something about -- Just the IDEA of bleeding that invokes pain ...

Whether the pain of childbirth ... The pain of a wound ... The pain of a "Bleeding Heart" ... (That "time of the month" pain) -- Yeah, you wit da stains in ya panties -- *chuckles* -- But blood denotes LIFE -- as well as pain -- Because without "Blood" there is NO LIFE!

So if we're all bleeding -- AT LEAST WE KNOW WE'RE ALIVE, RIGHT? -- *smiles*


I'm really enjoying this thread Missy! -- *wink*

Makes me think! -- ;^)

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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13. "why haven't you looked at my newest pieces?"
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http://soundcloud.com/phyziks

"Furthermore, the only high that I am feeling right now is my natural magnificence."-BarTek while face down in an 8-ball.

  

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16. "i like the visuals nm"
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faith is demonstrated
belief. ©mike holt

  

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14. "RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)"
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"So balarina continue to dance on the lines that seperate live and death, nurture and torture. You control so much, even if you decide to do so little. We, men, are brilliantly entrapped in the splendor that is you."

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15. "RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)"
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She is the most beautifully neccessary river in all the lands, although her riddles come in ripples that slowly erode sanity.

"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession."
- Robert Frost

http://inevitabletruth.blogspot.com/
http://www.lulu.com/content/187759
http://www.hdfest.com/Barry/allreviewsbarry.html
http://wishbonec.wordpress.com/

  

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17. "RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)"
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^^ Alright Chaotic!! I like that one. Instant, beautiful sentiments my brother.

"From blood I dwelled. Thighs, a conch shell opening to birth man. In the beginning we were one."

~*~
Beauty is in my ear
I sketch beautiful
rhythms with a pen
canvassing
my thoughts
artfully articulated
into harmonies of
words
~*~ KSB ~*~

"My fear is my only courage."
Bob Marley

~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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lunaeco
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18. "RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)"
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for what is not there, for those lost and left aside, for my own and the world's hope and mothering love, for understanding, i bleed

~~~


my
blue
song
http://au.briefcase.yahoo.com/bc/lilibluu/lst?&.dir=/blue/blue+thoughts+lunavamoloonerdco&.src=bc&.view=l

  

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19. "*taps microphone*"
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watch your step there...THANK YOU...GOODNIGHT!


you will like vicversus...


This for yall keeping them bills payed / gas in the car with whatevers left / keeping something on the plate.(c) i said it.


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dude, getting a response from the folks at freestyle is like watching water boil...© Tek

  

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20. "RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)"
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may your flow be smooth, cramp free and induce knowledge in every moment as you purify the channel of life...

i must note i have been here several times and words illuded me till now...kept feelin like this was a woman thing that really should not have been touched, cause what do i really know...only what you tell me and what i surmise from the other side...

ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
checkout these sites
http://4luvofpoetry.com
www.poetology.com

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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21. "".""
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you will like vicversus...


This for yall keeping them bills payed / gas in the car with whatevers left / keeping something on the plate.(c) i said it.


http://uncleblaksplace.blogspot.com/

----------sig-----------

http://unclevicart.com/

me and the fellas would converge and heat up some Hot Pockets in preparation for Rap City.© Roc

dude, getting a response from the folks at freestyle is like watching water boil...© Tek

  

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Nowachaoticthing
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22. "RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)"
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Now, this is not a quote I created myself, but I felt that it was appropriate for this topic:

"Ooh baby, ooh baby, ooh baby,
Yeah baby, yeah baby, yeah baby,
Oh yeah... yeah yeah baby...
Ooooh... oh yeah baby...

...aw... aw... aw NAW baby!
Ewww... that's nasty!
Naw... it's cool, baby... I'm alright...
Just... uhm... watch out for the bedspread baby...

Naw... it's cool... how about... how about...
How 'bout I call you NEXT WEEK?" ~Chef, from "South Park"

"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession."
- Robert Frost

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Sepia Ink
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26. "RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)"
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*lol* funny

  

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23. "RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)"
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Transfusions only work when giving to the living -- I'd gladly bleed for you if your heart still pumped with "LOVE" -- (But it's DEAD -- So you gits NO LOVE) -- *chuckles*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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24. "~ WeMoon ~"
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woman, women, wemoon..
bathe humanity in the glow of
evolutions birthed and rebirthed
quenched with the wetness of our femininity

Breathe E.Z.
~ Zhana ~

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"Keep your power just in the day that you are living on this Earth, and not on how to maneuver tomorrow." ~Meditations for Souls in Process

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"Why do you stay in prison
when the door is so wide open?" ~Rumi

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"Give me a naked Soul... And a Mature Mind." ~Joshua Redman

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"Though we seem to be sleeping,
there is an inner wakefulness
that directs the dream,
and that will eventually startle us back
to the truth of who we are." ~Rumi



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"und ur musick SUKS! i aiy'nt hurd won singel floot onn a trak! i doa'nt cair iff itt iz a demoh! u STARRT wif a floot, THIN u wriat leericks, THIN u rekord a demoh. DAM nega! evurrywon knoes thaat!" -RUBURT KOLLEY

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25. "archive - 1st request"
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~o~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
RIP Simmon Teffera (1983-1/15/2003), you are always with us.

"Before I became a member of this group, I thought a Haiku was just a villian on the "Samauri Jack" cartoon." © Nowachaoticthing



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27. "I Second That "ARCHIVE" Request --"
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*Yuuuup*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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28. "Retention: Recommended"
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Let's keep this one... it's an original.

"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession."
- Robert Frost

http://inevitabletruth.blogspot.com/
http://www.lulu.com/content/187759
http://www.hdfest.com/Barry/allreviewsbarry.html
http://wishbonec.wordpress.com/

  

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29. "This is inspiring!"
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Through a pathway called Woman I breathed my first breath and it was called Light.

~*~
Beauty is in my ear
I sketch beautiful
rhythms with a pen
canvassing
my thoughts
artfully articulated
into harmonies of
words
~*~ KSB ~*~

"My feelings or emotions or anything at all will reverberate throughout the halls of a poem."
~KSB~

"My fear is my only courage."
Bob Marley

~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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Intrepid Vixen
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30. "No place to go but"
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To THE TOP

~*~
Beauty is in my ear
I sketch beautiful
rhythms with a pen
canvassing
my thoughts
artfully articulated
into harmonies of
words
~*~ KSB ~*~

"My feelings or emotions or anything at all will reverberate throughout the halls of a poem."
~KSB~

"My fear is my only courage."
Bob Marley

~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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delrica
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31. "holding for a week..."
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one more week to add on and then archive?

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~o~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
RIP Simmon Teffera (1983-1/15/2003), you are always with us.

"Before I became a member of this group, I thought a Haiku was just a villian on the "Samauri Jack" cartoon." © Nowachaoticthing



■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■

----------------------
Cop my stuff, mayne!

My first chapbook: "This Chapbook Was Made With Pilfered Office Products" available now - $6.00

My 2nd chapbook, coming in 2007: "Orgasms and Ice Cream"

fmi: http://www.myspace.com/delrica

  

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