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14155, for women who bleed...(Add On)
Posted by Sepia Ink, Tue Feb-15-05 10:37 AM
This is a little exercise in quotes. We all write poems of all kinds, and I’d like to see more original quotes.

The topic is “Women” (men feel free to join in with an original quote on “women” as well), I’ll start, and you follow with your original quote pertaining to women….

*have fun*
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“I bleed out life sustaining serum which perpetuates your existence; so, you’ll excuse me if my mood swings once a month.”



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i am not simply a human being...i am a wom(b)an, being human.

14156, RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)
Posted by Intrepid Vixen, Tue Feb-15-05 10:40 AM
"I bleed, not cherry red dangling from stems, but love; the undefinable color of life."

~*~
Beauty is in my ear
I sketch beautiful
rhythms with a pen
canvassing
my thoughts
artfully articulated
into harmonies of
words
~*~ KSB ~*~

"My fear is my only courage."
Bob Marley

14157, wow
Posted by Sepia Ink, Tue Feb-15-05 10:48 AM
"the undefinable color of life"

I love that!

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i am not simply a human being...i am a womban, being human.

14158, RE: wow
Posted by Intrepid Vixen, Tue Feb-15-05 01:31 PM
Thank you! I was just trying dig into the same vibe as yours because that was a beautiful and true sentiment.

~*~
Beauty is in my ear
I sketch beautiful
rhythms with a pen
canvassing
my thoughts
artfully articulated
into harmonies of
words
~*~ KSB ~*~

"My fear is my only courage."
Bob Marley

14159, RE: wow
Posted by chideria, Tue Feb-15-05 02:31 PM
^dope, very.

"I bleed monthly, in order to release the negativity that has swollen in my womb; I've learned to devour the antagonist and release him in crimson colored streams- of passion."
14160, 24-hour woman
Posted by the perfect mistake, Tue Feb-15-05 03:10 PM
the beauty of a woman is found in the pit of her soul. she bleeds new life into this world, forever changing; but always remaining the same.





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faith is demonstrated
belief. ©mike holt
14161, RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Tue Feb-15-05 04:17 PM
An invisible flow drains from the pain of past mistakes – Bleeding, while receding on “Time” -- Floating on Wisdom’s lakes – I bleed in increments … Rationing for survival!
14162, .
Posted by Sepia Ink, Wed Feb-16-05 09:28 AM
"I bleed in increments … Rationing for survival"

that is hot! I want to quote you, can i, can i? *lol*

how you been girl?

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i am not simply a human being...i am a womban, being human.

14163, RE: .
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Wed Feb-16-05 12:56 PM
>I want to quote you, can i, can i? *lol*

Quote away, my sistah -- *smiles*

You're more than welcome to use any of my insane sentiments, thoughts or ideas!

You *know* you mah gyrl, right? -- ;^)

Check your INBOX later aaiight?

14164, my womb is a prophet
Posted by Sepia Ink, Wed Feb-16-05 09:43 AM
The future absorbs vermilion nectar from our centers while in incubus; our prophetic wombs tell tale of tomorrow.



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i am not simply a human being...i am a womban, being human.

14165, Visuals for the first quote
Posted by Sepia Ink, Wed Feb-16-05 09:50 AM
my white panties have red



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i am not simply a human being...i am a womban, being human.

14166, i think you are the only muthafucka bleedin
Posted by Monster_Zero, Wed Feb-16-05 12:59 PM

14167, RE: Visuals for the first quote
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Wed Feb-16-05 01:02 PM
There's something about -- Just the IDEA of bleeding that invokes pain ...

Whether the pain of childbirth ... The pain of a wound ... The pain of a "Bleeding Heart" ... (That "time of the month" pain) -- Yeah, you wit da stains in ya panties -- *chuckles* -- But blood denotes LIFE -- as well as pain -- Because without "Blood" there is NO LIFE!

So if we're all bleeding -- AT LEAST WE KNOW WE'RE ALIVE, RIGHT? -- *smiles*


I'm really enjoying this thread Missy! -- *wink*

Makes me think! -- ;^)
14168, why haven't you looked at my newest pieces?
Posted by Monster_Zero, Wed Feb-16-05 01:08 PM

14169, i like the visuals nm
Posted by the perfect mistake, Wed Feb-16-05 04:00 PM






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faith is demonstrated
belief. ©mike holt
14170, RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)
Posted by Instant_Vintage, Wed Feb-16-05 01:25 PM
"So balarina continue to dance on the lines that seperate live and death, nurture and torture. You control so much, even if you decide to do so little. We, men, are brilliantly entrapped in the splendor that is you."
14171, RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)
Posted by Nowachaoticthing, Wed Feb-16-05 01:34 PM
She is the most beautifully neccessary river in all the lands, although her riddles come in ripples that slowly erode sanity.
14172, RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)
Posted by Intrepid Vixen, Fri Feb-18-05 09:55 PM
^^ Alright Chaotic!! I like that one. Instant, beautiful sentiments my brother.

"From blood I dwelled. Thighs, a conch shell opening to birth man. In the beginning we were one."

~*~
Beauty is in my ear
I sketch beautiful
rhythms with a pen
canvassing
my thoughts
artfully articulated
into harmonies of
words
~*~ KSB ~*~

"My fear is my only courage."
Bob Marley

14173, RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)
Posted by lunaeco, Sat Feb-19-05 01:07 AM
for what is not there, for those lost and left aside, for my own and the world's hope and mothering love, for understanding, i bleed
14174, *taps microphone*
Posted by blak_yukon, Sat Feb-19-05 12:08 PM
watch your step there...THANK YOU...GOODNIGHT!


you will like vicversus...


This for yall keeping them bills payed / gas in the car with whatevers left / keeping something on the plate.(c) i said it.


http://uncleblaksplace.blogspot.com/
14175, RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)
Posted by ASIEM, Sat Feb-19-05 01:52 PM
may your flow be smooth, cramp free and induce knowledge in every moment as you purify the channel of life...

i must note i have been here several times and words illuded me till now...kept feelin like this was a woman thing that really should not have been touched, cause what do i really know...only what you tell me and what i surmise from the other side...

ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
checkout these sites
http://4luvofpoetry.com
www.poetology.com
14176, "."
Posted by blak_yukon, Sat Feb-19-05 02:07 PM
you will like vicversus...


This for yall keeping them bills payed / gas in the car with whatevers left / keeping something on the plate.(c) i said it.


http://uncleblaksplace.blogspot.com/
14177, RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)
Posted by Nowachaoticthing, Sun Feb-20-05 12:18 PM
Now, this is not a quote I created myself, but I felt that it was appropriate for this topic:

"Ooh baby, ooh baby, ooh baby,
Yeah baby, yeah baby, yeah baby,
Oh yeah... yeah yeah baby...
Ooooh... oh yeah baby...

...aw... aw... aw NAW baby!
Ewww... that's nasty!
Naw... it's cool, baby... I'm alright...
Just... uhm... watch out for the bedspread baby...

Naw... it's cool... how about... how about...
How 'bout I call you NEXT WEEK?" ~Chef, from "South Park"
14178, RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)
Posted by Sepia Ink, Thu Feb-24-05 08:10 AM
*lol* funny
14179, RE: for women who bleed...(Add On)
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Mon Feb-21-05 02:13 PM
Transfusions only work when giving to the living -- I'd gladly bleed for you if your heart still pumped with "LOVE" -- (But it's DEAD -- So you gits NO LOVE) -- *chuckles*
14180, ~ WeMoon ~
Posted by Phenomenality, Tue Feb-22-05 06:28 PM
woman, women, wemoon..
bathe humanity in the glow of
evolutions birthed and rebirthed
quenched with the wetness of our femininity

Breathe E.Z.
~ Zhana ~

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"Keep your power just in the day that you are living on this Earth, and not on how to maneuver tomorrow." ~Meditations for Souls in Process

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"Why do you stay in prison
when the door is so wide open?" ~Rumi

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"Give me a naked Soul... And a Mature Mind." ~Joshua Redman

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"Though we seem to be sleeping,
there is an inner wakefulness
that directs the dream,
and that will eventually startle us back
to the truth of who we are." ~Rumi



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"und ur musick SUKS! i aiy'nt hurd won singel floot onn a trak! i doa'nt cair iff itt iz a demoh! u STARRT wif a floot, THIN u wriat leericks, THIN u rekord a demoh. DAM nega! evurrywon knoes thaat!" -RUBURT KOLLEY
14181, archive - 1st request
Posted by delrica, Tue Feb-22-05 11:38 PM
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RIP Simmon Teffera (1983-1/15/2003), you are always with us.

"Before I became a member of this group, I thought a Haiku was just a villian on the "Samauri Jack" cartoon." © Nowachaoticthing



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14182, I Second That "ARCHIVE" Request --
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Thu Feb-24-05 08:20 AM
*Yuuuup*
14183, Retention: Recommended
Posted by Nowachaoticthing, Thu Feb-24-05 09:42 AM
Let's keep this one... it's an original.
14184, This is inspiring!
Posted by Intrepid Vixen, Thu Feb-24-05 09:46 AM
Through a pathway called Woman I breathed my first breath and it was called Light.

~*~
Beauty is in my ear
I sketch beautiful
rhythms with a pen
canvassing
my thoughts
artfully articulated
into harmonies of
words
~*~ KSB ~*~

"My feelings or emotions or anything at all will reverberate throughout the halls of a poem."
~KSB~

"My fear is my only courage."
Bob Marley

14185, No place to go but
Posted by Intrepid Vixen, Thu Feb-24-05 04:02 PM
To THE TOP

~*~
Beauty is in my ear
I sketch beautiful
rhythms with a pen
canvassing
my thoughts
artfully articulated
into harmonies of
words
~*~ KSB ~*~

"My feelings or emotions or anything at all will reverberate throughout the halls of a poem."
~KSB~

"My fear is my only courage."
Bob Marley

14186, holding for a week...
Posted by delrica, Fri Feb-25-05 08:20 AM
one more week to add on and then archive?

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RIP Simmon Teffera (1983-1/15/2003), you are always with us.

"Before I became a member of this group, I thought a Haiku was just a villian on the "Samauri Jack" cartoon." © Nowachaoticthing



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