10. "trying hard to keep panties clean" In response to In response to 0
whoa!...
that line alone could kill a ton of lines I've read on here over the years...
and the following are what I felt was definitely the meat of this piece of work:
dark circles under my eyes where hope and future usta be cheek bones razor sharp and lips that wouldn't bend
i saw fragments
and i know i would've given even what was left had he simply held out his hand i know i will give what's left if he just held out his hand
i wanted to get to the root think it, say it out loud sans all the poetic bullshit fk the dick craving fantastic flying thru space fkn till the sun stop shining... shit
im convinced i dont wanna write love poems feel love be love anymore
thats the real fear
im afraid that if he comes he'll try to get me first before i get him
you just... continue to strike nerves and make me happy that I've clicked on your posts... Seriously. *nods*