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22. "* * * Whateva vs. willi dudat * * *"
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Mon Dec-12-05 01:06 AM by Jon

          

TOPIC: squealing glocks
WORD: flower(s)
(read both, then reply with your vote in the subject line)

Whateva:

The stench of the mortally wounded, sprayed in my alley way
duel til the death, lead breaks the flesh, a cruel policy
the promise of engineered defeat, heat's oddyssey
ya heat, the source of fear and success on these streets
the tools you use to pluck them grass blades from ya cleats
in the summer the sun's down, school's out, tools out
elders protect da children, bid over, fools out
thread of lead unraveled til the spools out of material
the killings ain't serial, it's war, it's more spiritual
The Devil adopts the scared, an evil deed's a demon's miracle
trust invested into nine millimeters piercing ya ear lobes
squeeling glocks, spilling warm shells on the block
the sealing of 80's rock dealers last breaths at the top
the prophets, the Harry Potters, downed in goblets of fire
these kids, the flowers, the gifted, who never made it through thewire
sifted, respected, the sect that never settled for second
soldiers that quit dabbling in crack and peddled blessings

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willi_dudat:

okay quick scenario, given the common tale,
that the fate of ghetto children is death and/or jail;
the story i tell, we know too well,
but hell's bells chime,
death arrives with the whine of a flat line:
the names change but the report remains the same,
its fair game that aimed flame maims ya frame;
brought to abrupt halt, suffered aggy assault,
from an onslaught of squealin glocks set off by default:
the un-named owed us and failed to pay the debt,
thought it swept under rug, but none done so yet;
how soon some fo'get but there's only one atonement,
for blatant disrespect, the neglect and postponement:
matter of time 'fore the goons caught on,
unmarked cars sent shots rocket powered like von braun;
now dude's moms gotta make paul bearer assignments,
flower alignments, newly entwined in consignment:

  

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Topic Tourney: round 1 [View all] , Jon, Mon Dec-05-05 11:02 AM
 
Subject Author Message Date ID
INSTRUCTIONS and DEADLINES:
Dec 05th 2005
1
OFFICIAL LIST OF TOPICS (filed under contributor)
Dec 05th 2005
2
RE: Topic Tourney: round 1
Dec 05th 2005
3
LOL alright. space travel and cheese it is.
Dec 05th 2005
4
      ^
Dec 08th 2005
11
RE: Topic Tourney: round 1
Dec 05th 2005
5
no problem. thanks for being upfront.
Dec 05th 2005
6
i was kinda looking forward to gettin at you
Dec 06th 2005
9
      RE: i was kinda looking forward to gettin at you
Dec 06th 2005
10
RE: Topic Tourney: round 1
Dec 06th 2005
7
one should ask Auriz Deep, but my interpretation would be
Dec 06th 2005
8
RE: Topic Tourney: round 1
Dec 08th 2005
12
lol man an anchor would def be nice so i don't have to keep upping
Dec 08th 2005
13
RE: lol man an anchor would def be nice so i don't have to keep upping
Dec 08th 2005
14
I "third" the anchor!...
Dec 09th 2005
15
      RE: I "third" the anchor!...
Dec 09th 2005
16
           RE: I "third" the anchor!...
Dec 10th 2005
19
Hey Jon,
Dec 10th 2005
17
Get on it kid!
Dec 10th 2005
18
      RE: Mine is in!
Dec 12th 2005
23
yay! an anchor! THANK YOU!
Dec 10th 2005
20
UPDATE: still waiting on a lot of people. lets get a move on folks!
Dec 12th 2005
21
That ain't right
Dec 12th 2005
27
i'll def condsider that. but it might ruin the main point, which is to
Dec 13th 2005
30
ToeJam is right...
Dec 13th 2005
49
      yeah i'm now docking 1 vote for every day past sunday.
Dec 13th 2005
50
anybody have any suggestions?
Dec 13th 2005
31
      RE: anybody have any suggestions?
Dec 13th 2005
52
      RE: anybody have any suggestions?
Dec 14th 2005
64
           good idea
Dec 14th 2005
72
whateva
Dec 12th 2005
24
willi_dudat
Dec 12th 2005
25
Whateva~
Dec 12th 2005
28
RE: * * * Whateva vs. willi dudat * * *
Dec 13th 2005
32
whateva
Dec 13th 2005
55
whateva
Dec 14th 2005
65
that's what i was thinking too
Dec 14th 2005
71
Whateva
Dec 14th 2005
75
(and to all yall crews) whateva
Dec 14th 2005
79
* * * Auriz Deep vs BarTek * * *
Dec 12th 2005
26
Auriz Deep
Dec 13th 2005
48
Bartek
Dec 13th 2005
57
BarTek
Dec 14th 2005
66
Auriz Deep
Dec 14th 2005
76
BarTek
Dec 14th 2005
80
not to be impolite but I'm dropping out the tourney
Dec 12th 2005
29
ok muddywaters will be taking your place
Dec 13th 2005
35
      you know
Dec 13th 2005
41
           LMAO, i hear you, but he clarified. i'm gonna inbox you his words
Dec 13th 2005
51
im confused....
Dec 13th 2005
33
if someone else drops out, do you want to replace them?
Dec 13th 2005
34
      I do.
Dec 13th 2005
38
           you got it
Dec 13th 2005
39
* * * MiracleRic vs. ToeJam * * *
Dec 13th 2005
36
ToeJam
Dec 13th 2005
37
I luv ur name ToeJam, but MiracleRic got my vote....n/m
Dec 13th 2005
46
ToeJam
Dec 13th 2005
47
ToeJam
Dec 14th 2005
67
ToeJam
Dec 14th 2005
81
Toejam
Dec 15th 2005
90
MiracleRic~
Dec 15th 2005
92
ric
Dec 17th 2005
99
i cant vote on poetry...
Dec 13th 2005
40
it's easy
Dec 13th 2005
42
      ROFLOL
Dec 13th 2005
44
      RE: it's easy
Dec 13th 2005
54
           RE: it's easy
Dec 13th 2005
56
                delete
Dec 13th 2005
58
                RE: it's easy
Dec 13th 2005
59
                     fyi, the piece i wrote this time is meant to be spit.
Dec 13th 2005
60
                          you toejam?
Dec 13th 2005
61
                               nah i wasn't arguing with you or anything
Dec 13th 2005
62
                                    RE: nah i wasn't arguing with you or anything
Dec 13th 2005
63
RE: Topic Tourney: round 1
Dec 13th 2005
43
RE: Topic Tourney: round 1...I WIN...haha
Dec 13th 2005
45
LOL bravo!
Dec 13th 2005
53
RE: i didn't know this was a rhyme thing... so i brought flow...
Dec 14th 2005
68
anything DOES go
Dec 14th 2005
70
* * * knowledge3754 vs muddywaters * * *
Dec 14th 2005
69
muddywaters
Dec 14th 2005
73
muddywaters
Dec 14th 2005
74
muddywaters
Dec 14th 2005
77
muddywaters
Dec 14th 2005
78
* * * daniemuse * * *
Dec 15th 2005
82
RE: enjoyed
Dec 15th 2005
83
this was SUCH a good piece, i'm glad she got an auto KO lol
Dec 15th 2005
85
wow
Dec 15th 2005
86
that was ill...
Dec 15th 2005
88
feelin it.
Dec 15th 2005
91
RE: Fam, this was great... Respect
Dec 19th 2005
105
* * * Jon * * *
Dec 15th 2005
84
This was peace...
Dec 15th 2005
87
that was ill...as well...
Dec 15th 2005
89
RE: * * * Jon * * *
Dec 15th 2005
93
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Dec 16th 2005
94
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Dec 16th 2005
95
* * * blaksilence * * *
Dec 16th 2005
96
dope...
Dec 16th 2005
97
cool wordplay
Dec 17th 2005
98
* ~@= WINNERS =@~ *
Dec 19th 2005
100
RE: * ~@= WINNERS =@~ *
Dec 19th 2005
101
      thanks! i'm already posting the new match-ups, but
Dec 19th 2005
102
      Congrats to everyone...
Dec 19th 2005
103
      RE: Congrats to everyone...
Dec 20th 2005
106
           thanks. i appreciate that. i also agree. i hope more votes happen
Dec 20th 2005
107
      RE: Jon is awesome and very talented...
Dec 19th 2005
104
damn, too late to vote
Dec 21st 2005
108
Will Round 2 be after the holidays?... and
Dec 22nd 2005
109
i'm still making sunday the deadline, just so we don't lose momentum
Dec 22nd 2005
110
Archive...
Dec 22nd 2005
111
co-sign
Dec 22nd 2005
112
co-sign too
Dec 22nd 2005
113

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