Hello OKP Freestyle Folks~ Been reading for a long while and have mad respect for the gifts that grace this board. Thank You to all patient eyes.
--demeaned breathing am I, living out this dying of rudely evolving cursed emotions on tattered knees of painful regression’s daunting glare reaching blindly as I crawl through this abandoned wilderness of melancholy hues, for crumbs on which to nourish my increasingly famished heart's panting rhythm desolation's merciless taunting has pierced my soul raw and the kiss of indifference’s bliss has pilfered my once bold to be beautiful mantra of eternity’s faithful haunt my wearied blood courses a stagnate streaming of midnight blue torture emanating from lies embedded into the history of my pores staining my demoralized path of indignant purge in droplets, ripe with faith's checkered screams of disappointed virtue--
2. "RE: (Newbie- First Post) Sorrow Venting" In response to Reply # 0
Welcome to the boards and hey donot worry venting changes to pure poetry after you gain insight to your feelings and that takes ona voice inside that speaks thru the PEN so spill the blood and let the tears flow till ink spills a letter at a time... keep writing
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
6. "RE: (Newbie- First Post) Sorrow Venting" In response to Reply # 2
I appreciate the "welcome" and the encouragement Asiem. I'm one of those people who just has to speak what's inside or else, so writing helps keep me sane...and out of trouble. Most of the time, anyway
"How can you stand right in front of the truth and not see it?"
"OK...Who put a stop payment on my reality check?"
"Your age is one of my favorite things about you"~ Steve Martin
4. "I adored the following lines:" In response to Reply # 0
"taunting has pierced my soul raw and the kiss of indifference’s bliss has pilfered my once bold to be beautiful mantra of eternity’s faithful haunt my wearied blood courses a stagnate streaming of midnight blue torture emanating from lies embedded into the history of my pores staining my demoralized path of indignant purge in droplets, ripe with faith's checkered screams of disappointed virtue--"
You have a sensible way of conveying thoughts and feelings; very visual too... Welcome *nods*
9. "RE: (Newbie- First Post) Sorrow Venting" In response to Reply # 0
Your writing is familiar -- (Like someone who used to post on this board awhile back)
... but I digress ...
... as I welcome you to OKP Freestyle and thank you for this "Sorrow Venting" flow ...
*Nice~Ness*
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥
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