Hello OKP Freestyle Folks~ Been reading for a long while and have mad respect for the gifts that grace this board. Thank You to all patient eyes.



--demeaned breathing am I, living out this dying of rudely evolving cursed emotions on tattered knees of painful regression’s daunting glare
reaching blindly as I crawl through this abandoned wilderness of melancholy hues, for crumbs on which to nourish my increasingly famished heart's panting rhythm
desolation's merciless taunting has pierced my soul raw and the kiss of indifference’s bliss has pilfered my once bold to be beautiful mantra of eternity’s faithful haunt
my wearied blood courses a stagnate streaming of midnight blue torture emanating from lies embedded into the history of my pores
staining my demoralized path of indignant purge in droplets, ripe with faith's checkered screams of disappointed virtue--

DAMN! I wasn't expecting to go on this journey wit'cha but I'm glad
I DID . .{}

guilty of everything
-xxx

LOL. Glad you hung in there though it was unexpected Huey. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Welcome to the boards and hey donot worry venting changes to pure poetry after you gain insight to your feelings and that takes ona voice inside that speaks thru the PEN so spill the blood and let the tears flow till ink spills a letter at a time...
keep writing

I appreciate the "welcome" and the encouragement Asiem. I'm one of those people who just has to speak what's inside or else, so writing helps keep me sane...and out of trouble. Most of the time, anyway ;-)

Pleasure to see you Re: poem
Body: read as drops of powdered
Warm rain on a desert land

'Refreshing'

Thank you Babynoon..cute name, btw :-). Every word bestowed is much appreciated.

"taunting has pierced my soul raw and the kiss of indifference’s bliss has pilfered my once bold to be beautiful mantra of eternity’s faithful haunt
my wearied blood courses a stagnate streaming of midnight blue torture emanating from lies embedded into the history of my pores
staining my demoralized path of indignant purge in droplets, ripe with faith's checkered screams of disappointed virtue--"

You have a sensible way of conveying thoughts and feelings; very visual too... Welcome *nods*

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Words of appreciation from someone whose gift I admire as much as yours is humbling. Thank you mindful.

Your writing is familiar -- (Like someone who used to post on this board awhile back)

... but I digress ...

... as I welcome you to OKP Freestyle and thank you for this "Sorrow Venting" flow ...


*Nice~Ness*

Digression notwithstanding, I thank you for both the welcome and kind review Photo.

Double take




"Loveit"-Bilal