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PhotoSynthesis
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"EmBri - Yo"
Wed Apr-01-09 08:27 PM by PhotoSynthesis

          

Baby words
… incubate
……in fragile shells
As egg shaped exclamations feed fractured phrases

I can
… At least
…… I think
……… I can
……….. Dammittt, I “know” I “can”!!!
Positive affirmations
… break thru dense communications

While the warmth of wordplay is distributed
… under heat lamps
There’s no way I can’t feel it
…generating ... syncopating ...scintillating
Tickling toes with primitive prose
Can you feel it?
Movement … Stirring … Thumping … Whirring …
Tryna release
… embryonic thoughts
caught between mindless membrane
Formation is vital to pronunciation
… as sentences scream for emancipation

The shell breaks …
Words spill over into consciousness
Wet & Witty … they are
Fresh & new … they are
… like sunshine … casting rainbows … on drop of morning dew … they are

Mother nature’s milk will nourish these newborn babies
… until they’re ready to speak


… to B Continued …













A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: EmBri - Yo
Apr 02nd 2009
1
RE: EmBri - Yo
Apr 02nd 2009
2
      You're Funny "G"
Apr 05th 2009
6
RE: EmBri - Yo
Apr 03rd 2009
3
I really feel like
Apr 04th 2009
4
RE: I really feel like
Apr 04th 2009
5
RE: EmBri - Yo
Apr 05th 2009
7
s;aight...
Apr 06th 2009
8
RE: s;aight...
Apr 07th 2009
9
RE: EmBri - Yo
Apr 07th 2009
10
RE: EmBri - Yo
May 12th 2009
13
RE: EmBri - Yo
Apr 08th 2009
11
Hey Eagle~Eye ...
Apr 08th 2009
12
Lady Ga-Ga Goo-Goo???
May 15th 2009
14
Miracles DO Happen!!!
May 15th 2009
15
      im no longer inspired
May 19th 2009
18
           RE: im no longer inspired
May 19th 2009
19
                lol
May 19th 2009
20
i love the focused play with the meter
May 17th 2009
16
Ahhhhhhhh ...
May 18th 2009
17

gsquared
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Thu Apr-02-09 12:57 AM

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1. "RE: EmBri - Yo"
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Feelings that bleed onto pages because they
have nowhere else to go is the source of poetry, no conscious message necessary...those feelings expressed tell the tale their own way..look forward to
seeing the little one grow...

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm



  

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gsquared
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Thu Apr-02-09 04:39 AM

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2. "RE: EmBri - Yo"
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OMG I am mortified that I said feelings "is," they are : > )

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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6. "You're Funny "G""
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>OMG I am mortified that I said feelings "is," they are : > )

But U know .... I unda~stand -- *smiles*

... and oftentimes, "your" responses supply fodder/fertilizer for my poet~TREE garden --


*No Mortification* --

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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HueyNewton
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Fri Apr-03-09 02:38 PM

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3. "RE: EmBri - Yo"
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it's 75 degrees, I can feel it like vocab flows thru diction . .
YEAH I CAN HEAR IT TOO, NICE ONE PHOTO!

I still read the wall street journal
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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Zin
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4. "I really feel like"
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you were addressing the boards on this ... like this is how you really feel about this place ...

I saw some of my thoughts on the board's current state in there

i don't know tho ... just could be me over thinking the piece

never~the~less nice piece ... you can tell i felt what you were saying.

sig.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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PhotoSynthesis
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5. "RE: I really feel like"
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You're very perceptive, Obi~Won~ZIN~obi --

... one of the things I like aboutcha! --




A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Pit Bull
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7. "RE: EmBri - Yo"
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Looks like you got over your writer's block in impressive fashion here, Photo- its good to see you drop something on this level again. Thank you for sharing and inspiring with your free form self.

"What is done in love always takes place beyond good and evil." -- Nietzsche

  

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blak_yukon
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8. "s;aight..."
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;)





me and the fellas would converge and heat up some Hot Pockets in preparation for Rap City.© Roc

dude, getting a response from the folks at freestyle is like watching water boil...© Tek

  

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freedomfighter
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9. "RE: s;aight..."
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cosign

  

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Decstar
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10. "RE: EmBri - Yo"
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>>>Formation is vital to pronunciation
… as sentences scream for emancipation<<<

that was a hot line

i'm grabbin alot from this, but tha wordplay was crazy. i like this. lookin forward to seein it grow

"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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13. "RE: EmBri - Yo"
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It's growing ... slowly but surely --

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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11. "RE: EmBri - Yo"
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woman, u got me started with this and u cut me off!

i'm lovin it! lookin forward to part II.

such an accurate depiction of how the inspired thoughts are born and form into phrases filtered through the passion of being, the warm soul and creative, affluent mind...

love it


MUSE

...
..
.

Speak and it shall manifest
Breathe and it shall live
Love and it shall triumph
Give and it shall never be
lost... ever... - MarcArthur
St. Juste

"not one voice unheard" -
VOICES NYC (Brooklyn, NY)

HALLELU YAHWEH! AMEN

  

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12. "Hey Eagle~Eye ..."
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*smiles*

Itz good to see you flying around the OKP nest --

Thanx for peepin' my ish, and feelin' what I was tryna say.


~Much Appreciated~


And Welcome Back

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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MiracleRic
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14. "Lady Ga-Ga Goo-Goo???"
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Hey Photo...

this was pretty good...nice concept...glad to see someone stuck around

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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15. "Miracles DO Happen!!!"
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-- It's good 2 C U back on board, Mr. Miracle ... (((Forreal Tho)))


While you're here, could you turn some water into wine ... or raise some of these dead folks on the board with ONE of your flows, please? --


*Missed You*


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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18. "im no longer inspired"
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unfortunately...

the well has been dry so long, lol

but i may start reading pieces here and there...

i may even add on to a few...

but beyond that...not even capable or so it seems...

who u been?

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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19. "RE: im no longer inspired"
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you little fucker.

How dare you vanish for years at a time.

Nevermind what I may or may not have done.

"What is done in love always takes place beyond good and evil." -- Nietzsche

  

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20. "lol"
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Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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16. "i love the focused play with the meter"
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i never thinking about that when i'm writing..

this has definitely inspired me try some new approaches.

thank you

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17. "Ahhhhhhhh ..."
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So ^this^ is where you got your inspiration from on the last coupla joints you posted, huh? --


*NyCe 2 Know*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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