Baby words
… incubate
……in fragile shells
As egg shaped exclamations feed fractured phrases

I can
… At least
…… I think
……… I can
……….. Dammittt, I “know” I “can”!!!
Positive affirmations
… break thru dense communications

While the warmth of wordplay is distributed
… under heat lamps
There’s no way I can’t feel it
…generating ... syncopating ...scintillating
Tickling toes with primitive prose
Can you feel it?
Movement … Stirring … Thumping … Whirring …
Tryna release
… embryonic thoughts
caught between mindless membrane
Formation is vital to pronunciation
… as sentences scream for emancipation

The shell breaks …
Words spill over into consciousness
Wet & Witty … they are
Fresh & new … they are
… like sunshine … casting rainbows … on drop of morning dew … they are

Mother nature’s milk will nourish these newborn babies
… until they’re ready to speak


… to B Continued …

Feelings that bleed onto pages because they
have nowhere else to go is the source of poetry, no conscious message necessary...those feelings expressed tell the tale their own way..look forward to
seeing the little one grow...

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

OMG I am mortified that I said feelings "is," they are : > )

>OMG I am mortified that I said feelings "is," they are : > )

But U know .... I unda~stand -- *smiles*

... and oftentimes, "your" responses supply fodder/fertilizer for my poet~TREE garden -- :9


*No Mortification* -- x(

it's 75 degrees, I can feel it like vocab flows thru diction . .
YEAH I CAN HEAR IT TOO, NICE ONE PHOTO!

I still read the wall street journal
-xxx

you were addressing the boards on this ... like this is how you really feel about this place ...

I saw some of my thoughts on the board's current state in there

i don't know tho ... just could be me over thinking the piece

never~the~less nice piece ... you can tell i felt what you were saying.

You're very perceptive, Obi~Won~ZIN~obi -- :9

... one of the things I like aboutcha! -- ;)

Looks like you got over your writer's block in impressive fashion here, Photo- its good to see you drop something on this level again. Thank you for sharing and inspiring with your free form self.

;)





me and the fellas would converge and heat up some Hot Pockets in preparation for Rap City.© Roc

dude, getting a response from the folks at freestyle is like watching water boil...© Tek

cosign

>>>Formation is vital to pronunciation
… as sentences scream for emancipation<<<

that was a hot line

i'm grabbin alot from this, but tha wordplay was crazy. i like this. lookin forward to seein it grow

It's growing ... slowly but surely -- :9

woman, u got me started with this and u cut me off!

i'm lovin it! lookin forward to part II.

such an accurate depiction of how the inspired thoughts are born and form into phrases filtered through the passion of being, the warm soul and creative, affluent mind...

love it


MUSE

*smiles*

Itz good to see you flying around the OKP nest -- :)

Thanx for peepin' my ish, and feelin' what I was tryna say.


~Much Appreciated~


And Welcome Back

Hey Photo...

this was pretty good...nice concept...glad to see someone stuck around

;)

:9 -- It's good 2 C U back on board, Mr. Miracle ... (((Forreal Tho)))


While you're here, could you turn some water into wine ... or raise some of these dead folks on the board with ONE of your flows, please? -- :P


*Missed You*

unfortunately...

the well has been dry so long, lol

but i may start reading pieces here and there...

i may even add on to a few...

but beyond that...not even capable or so it seems...

who u been?

you little fucker.

How dare you vanish for years at a time.

Nevermind what I may or may not have done.

i never thinking about that when i'm writing..

this has definitely inspired me try some new approaches.

thank you ;)

So ^this^ is where you got your inspiration from on the last coupla joints you posted, huh? -- :9


*NyCe 2 Know*