I bare burdens which determine my cause,
spoken scripture reborn,
which controversially contradicted my form,
contra verbalistic gerbils be warned,
antagonist,justifies this writing pacifist swarm,
of written,to spat antics to transcribe semantincs,
to amplify and satisfy unanimous force..

Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

I likes ... *so far* --


But since it's unfinished ... I have a coupla edits for when you 'do' finish it:

>I bare burdens which determine my cause, (I "BEAR" burdens)
>spoken scripture reborn,
>which controversially contradicted my form,
>contra verbalistic gerbils be warned,
>antagonist,justifies this writing pacifist swarm,
>of written,to spat antics to transcribe semantincs, (SEMANTICS)
>to amplify and satisfy unanimous force..


You have quite a grip on context ... *Keep Polishing*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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