im still counting the days
15
same as your age

i cant think about nothing
but you
that smile
that strut
that shine

i couldnt get out of bed
this morning
my pillow stays wet

its too soon
everything is coming
too quick
im still not
right
i still cant
write

the wails came
this morning, they did
from deep inside
animal like
escaping the core of me
leaping from my lungs
like volcanic fire
my hands clawed at the air
like clawing at dirt
like trying to bring you back

that's it.
that's it.

i want you here
with me
cheek to cheek
arm in arm
touch me
shadow box me
hug me
kiss me
wrap those arms
around me
be my baby
my big man
my broad shouldered
tall strong
witty bright
big man

dont want you there
down there over there in there

see...

im not ready yet
its too soon
too quick
im not at rest
yet
i cant write
yet
cause i aint right
yet

@asiaradiant

you can't write but you got it right
right off the tip now close your eyes and just take a sip
and don't be judgemental
this was a finger plucking the instrumental
of a dove fall caught up
in your nest the vest falls
hand on chest one day it was just a wish happen that way?

fabulous
something smells like fish!
TE-TE
The End - To Everybody

i just want chu to know
how i feel
how i feel

"you'll get there|here in time," but it just doesn't seem appropriate.

this is a very powerful piece, deep & poignant. i'll be thinking about it for quite some time...

im still not
right
i still cant
write

the wails came
this morning, they did
from deep inside
animal like
escaping the core of me
leaping from my lungs
like volcanic fire
my hands clawed at the air
like clawing at dirt
like trying to bring you back

that's it.
that's it.

welcome back.

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*childlike*

i see. thanks. always appreciated.

@asiaradiant

in gods time...right now...he's refining u...like precious silver...let god do his thing...love...miss k

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

good advice. im trying. aint easy at all, but im trying. thanks.

@asiaradiant

Time'we will never be ready for the unexpected

I feel you on this

"its too soon
everything is coming
too quick
im still not
right
i still cant
write"

And those lines below were,


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"escaping the core of me
leaping from my lungs
like volcanic fire
my hands clawed at the air
like clawing at dirt
like trying to bring you back"


Wow thanx for sharing.

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i appreciate the read and comment. somebody can feel me, i appreciate that.

@asiaradiant