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70970, i'd say,
Posted by mindful, Mon Nov-05-07 08:47 PM
"you'll get there|here in time," but it just doesn't seem appropriate.
this is a very powerful piece, deep & poignant. i'll be thinking about it for quite some time...
im still not
right
i still cant
write
the wails came
this morning, they did
from deep inside
animal like
escaping the core of me
leaping from my lungs
like volcanic fire
my hands clawed at the air
like clawing at dirt
like trying to bring you back
that's it.
that's it.
welcome back.
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