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marijane
Member since Feb 26th 2004
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Mon Oct-01-07 02:22 PM

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"when's my wind?"


  

          

I need to see an Optometrist

cause i got a love stigmatism

not the kind I can kiss either, moreso the anticipatory may never happen for me longing to be touched wanton love type vision blocker

I can't pay attention

so I steal moments

reliving the sensualities of yore

days passed carried sweet whispers like chicago wind

strong enough to knock me down

now disrespectful inuendos and series' of excellent suitors from far away taunt me with a gentle breeze of maybe

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WITH CUZ (STACEY) GONE, I'LL NEVER REALLY BE HERE AGAIN

I swear I'm a marry an OKP


Nakia Genevieve are my middle names... Not my attempt to morph Phenom with Novembersgift... But...

  

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RE: when's my wind?
Oct 02nd 2007
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RE: when's my wind?
Oct 08th 2007
2
your so talented...
Oct 09th 2007
3
I heart you
Oct 09th 2007
4
RE: when's my wind?
Oct 13th 2007
5

InGeniousPoet
Member since Feb 17th 2003
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Tue Oct-02-07 11:15 PM

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1. "RE: when's my wind?"
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let him be your paper airplane in the chicago wind, you just might end up in the eden of your dreams.
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"With peace and love in my lungs,
I hold my breath until the Poet returns."

--Boxcarboys

  

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invisible ink
Member since Apr 07th 2003
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Mon Oct-08-07 04:23 PM

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2. "RE: when's my wind?"
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this reminds me of a nikki giovanni piece called i wrote a nice omelet...it has that same witty breeze to it



was dug....miss k

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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KnowOne
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Tue Oct-09-07 08:46 AM

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3. "your so talented..."
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and your message is complex in its simplicity....

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"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

IG: KnowOne215 | PS+ ID: KnowOne215

  

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marijane
Member since Feb 26th 2004
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Tue Oct-09-07 07:28 PM

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4. "I heart you"
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that's so cliché but who cares it's true

_____________________________________
WITH CUZ (STACEY) GONE, I'LL NEVER REALLY BE HERE AGAIN

I swear I'm a marry an OKP


Nakia Genevieve are my middle names... Not my attempt to morph Phenom with Novembersgift... But...

  

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ASIEM
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Sat Oct-13-07 11:01 PM

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5. "RE: when's my wind?"
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your words reached
to the east
longing to listen
for the rip of sheets
as paper gave way to the pen
and recorded your every breath
this wind you speak
hurled across a devide
lifted mine own blind needs
and met me
like a hurricane
twisting i long to be
in the center of your eye
do u see me?

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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