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Topic subject | when's my wind? |
Topic URL | http://board.okayplayer.com/okp.php?az=show_topic&forum=7&topic_id=70432 |
70432, when's my wind? Posted by marijane, Mon Oct-01-07 02:22 PM
I need to see an Optometrist
cause i got a love stigmatism
not the kind I can kiss either, moreso the anticipatory may never happen for me longing to be touched wanton love type vision blocker
I can't pay attention
so I steal moments
reliving the sensualities of yore
days passed carried sweet whispers like chicago wind
strong enough to knock me down
now disrespectful inuendos and series' of excellent suitors from far away taunt me with a gentle breeze of maybe
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70437, RE: when's my wind? Posted by InGeniousPoet, Tue Oct-02-07 11:15 PM
let him be your paper airplane in the chicago wind, you just might end up in the eden of your dreams. ________________________________________ "With peace and love in my lungs, I hold my breath until the Poet returns."
--Boxcarboys
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70499, RE: when's my wind? Posted by invisible ink, Mon Oct-08-07 04:23 PM
this reminds me of a nikki giovanni piece called i wrote a nice omelet...it has that same witty breeze to it
was dug....miss k
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70511, your so talented... Posted by KnowOne, Tue Oct-09-07 08:46 AM
and your message is complex in its simplicity....
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70522, I heart you Posted by marijane, Tue Oct-09-07 07:28 PM
that's so cliché but who cares it's true
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70592, RE: when's my wind? Posted by ASIEM, Sat Oct-13-07 11:01 PM
your words reached to the east longing to listen for the rip of sheets as paper gave way to the pen and recorded your every breath this wind you speak hurled across a devide lifted mine own blind needs and met me like a hurricane twisting i long to be in the center of your eye do u see me?
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
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