2. "RE: you profit from my demise" In response to Reply # 0
I bet that felt good -- Gettin' it out -- vocally!
I felt relaxation at the end -- Like you had purged out the demons and cleansed your system of betrayal & pain.
Your voice followed the beat relatively nice, considering it kinda sounded like you were reading the words -- (which is still good)
*Keep Draining the Pain Til' It's All OUT*
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥
4. "yeah this track wasnt about quality @ all.." In response to Reply # 0
i made mad mistakes but it wasnt about that i need to vent cuz people dont understand why im going through what im goin thru and they dont even give me a chance and i didnt even know that my mother was setting me up but she has done it to me as a kid making my dad be really hard on me getting me in trouble with him as a kid so i fought it and ran away from home then she just continued to lie on me and pay people to set me up she was a single parent before she met my step dad and i was her sidekick and when i fought that abuse she just continued to set me up and covers it up with excuses like its for my dad but its not thats a coverup me and him dont even get along the first time i was arrested was because we got into a fight he hit me and called 50 on me
but everyone thinks that im competing so they keep coming @ me
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