"...Spread Thin" Sat Feb-10-07 02:52 PM by omo_oba
Cupid Spread Thin
cupid takes breaks from striking to call me to lie next to and then to him
and this is blue cool usually with some background beat blaring perfectly tuned out as we tune in to each other
we know our lies and in turn deliver our lines with stellar conviction “read me you so i can read you me” our eyes say then we pause
his bow pushed aside we push attire to the side and let limbs, not love, be
we fall on the 1st on the 2nd perhaps the 3rd if the moon was right as each time is a cause to praise valentine
“you always miss me but i manage to catch some your arrows with snake like reflex twiddling your mark and passive aggression playfully i won’t let you get me cause we won’t function got”
“we are only because our existence is an attempt at civil union i own up to our truth because i understand our lie i’ll never own all your arrows i don’t want your love”
thie ending has me wondering with so much content it seemed to end abruptly and kinna the easy way out whaat?
"i don't want your love" ??? is that really true?
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥
7. "RE: i thought the following lines" In response to Reply # 4
totally understand. a lot of my pieces are kinda like works in progress. i put down the first thing that comes to mind when i want to convey something and usually leave it as is. this was what free flowing. the section you took to took me more time the rest because i knew what i wanted to play around with and then had to figure out a 'pretty' way of doing so
thanks for the feedback... working on finishing this up... will post up when done