watch me
watch me sit here and wait
watch me pass on my fate
watch as i build hate, distaste
my own feelings steaming and self loathing
inaction holding me back from boasting

so i sink -
a river revealing my deepest demons
seemingly seething my soul
as i struggle to stroke & stay afloat
looking for any hope or reason
but my seeing is revealing treason
commited by my own being
the feeling im feeling
a reflection of the inaction of my actions

an infatuation of passion
passing on whats really important and lastin'
so i put myself on blast
for mistakes i made in my past
Forgive me for my lies
forgive me for being an ass
forgive me

Love the word play. There is a bit of emotion involved here as well.
Nice stuff.

word
thanks for posting i appreciate feedback on my joints
always trying to get better so everything helps especially the encouragement

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