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Rajeniro757
Member since Jun 08th 2003
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Thu Dec-28-06 09:04 AM

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"I don't know what to call this shit ( name this piece)((please))"


  

          

Ray's anger to the page
in his mind a cage
fuck water and bread
been fed rage for days
bout to raise war more
then minimum wage
army brigades,
kids aged playing with all 54
24 hardly made it to 22
Doing tours Hampton and Bad News
pack 20's in your shoes
cause its hard drinks
when the dues are due
caught under heat
like you got the flu
hope the shots are through
and not thru you
I lost a few
on some short ciruit
I lost a screw
fuse done blew like noreasters
NirotheGreat aka Black Ceaser
here with Haitians and a
Heaping helping of Heaters

R.I.P. Martin alexander (Marty Gra) Alston - my brother, my mentor , my friend-

  

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Callit Graib A
Dec 30th 2006
1
Ahhh thanks
Dec 30th 2006
2
RE: I don't know what to call this shit ( name this piece)((please))
Dec 30th 2006
3
..:::Shattered Word Showers:::..
Jan 02nd 2007
4

marijane
Member since Feb 26th 2004
13093 posts
Sat Dec-30-06 04:22 PM

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1. "Callit Graib A"
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i don't know why this reminded me of a tortured min'd thoughts experiencing abu graib...maybe not. Keep shining

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WITH CUZ (STACEY) GONE, I'LL NEVER REALLY BE HERE AGAIN

I swear I'm a marry an OKP


Nakia Genevieve are my middle names... Not my attempt to morph Phenom with Novembersgift... But...

  

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Rajeniro757
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Sat Dec-30-06 09:49 PM

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for reading and commenting.

R.I.P. Martin alexander (Marty Gra) Alston - my brother, my mentor , my friend-

  

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cousin
Member since Jan 29th 2006
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Sat Dec-30-06 11:56 PM

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3. "RE: I don't know what to call this shit ( name this piece)((please))"
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I see you son...

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Tue Jan-02-07 03:55 PM

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4. "..:::Shattered Word Showers:::.."
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Felt like tiny razor~sharp shards -- Falling ...


*Felt Em'*


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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