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Topic subjectI don't know what to call this shit ( name this piece)((please))
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62823, I don't know what to call this shit ( name this piece)((please))
Posted by Rajeniro757, Thu Dec-28-06 09:04 AM
Ray's anger to the page
in his mind a cage
fuck water and bread
been fed rage for days
bout to raise war more
then minimum wage
army brigades,
kids aged playing with all 54
24 hardly made it to 22
Doing tours Hampton and Bad News
pack 20's in your shoes
cause its hard drinks
when the dues are due
caught under heat
like you got the flu
hope the shots are through
and not thru you
I lost a few
on some short ciruit
I lost a screw
fuse done blew like noreasters
NirotheGreat aka Black Ceaser
here with Haitians and a
Heaping helping of Heaters
62859, Callit Graib A
Posted by marijane, Sat Dec-30-06 04:22 PM
i don't know why this reminded me of a tortured min'd thoughts experiencing abu graib...maybe not. Keep shining
62864, Ahhh thanks
Posted by Rajeniro757, Sat Dec-30-06 09:49 PM
for reading and commenting.
62865, RE: I don't know what to call this shit ( name this piece)((please))
Posted by cousin, Sat Dec-30-06 11:56 PM
I see you son...
62899, ..:::Shattered Word Showers:::..
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Tue Jan-02-07 03:55 PM
Felt like tiny razor~sharp shards -- Falling ...


*Felt Em'*