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BarefootAquarian
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"My Addiction"
Tue Sep-26-06 03:17 PM by BarefootAquarian

  

          

I'm addicted to caffine, hip hop, suhshine mixed with flip flops,

good books, good looks,

pictures that my father took,

Redskins, 16 wins, rock and roll pins,

minds that are open,

Southern pride, cow hide, baggage I got locked inside,

fuck it. I already cried.

I'm addicted to

phat beats, track meets, running from the ill shit,

Winter heat, city streets, occasional spliffs lit,

muscle cars, dive bars, jazz, reggae, rock and roll,

silver rings, shiny things, never catch me rockin' gold.

Indy flicks, funky chicks, rhyme ciphers and mosh pits,

mangos, tangos, learning how the slang goes,

last dances, second chances, memorable circumstances

my addiction just enhances.

I'm a fiend for

hard laughs, well-written paragraphs, going halfs,

road trips, round hips, late nights, being right,

short fiction, local diction,

Joe. I feen for my addiction.

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Plus I got niggas in DC
That'll hit you for 3G's and a box of Yum's carry out!
Little Brother


Protest!
http://www.hal-pc.org/~edi/lih.jpg

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: My Addiction
Sep 26th 2006
1
nice.
Sep 26th 2006
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RE: My Addiction
Sep 26th 2006
3
Where the F***** U Been Homie!
Sep 27th 2006
4
it's good to see you around
Sep 27th 2006
5
RE: My Addiction
Sep 27th 2006
6

Amai_1
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Tue Sep-26-06 03:18 PM

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1. "RE: My Addiction"
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I'm feeling this - very interesting.

  

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STIMULI
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Tue Sep-26-06 03:48 PM

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2. "nice."
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very light, very enjoyable.







The guilty one is not he who commits the sin, but the one who causes the darkness.

Victor Hugo

  

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ASIEM
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Tue Sep-26-06 05:51 PM

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3. "RE: My Addiction"
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long time since i seen you here...nice drizzle fun feelin readin this

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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ThaAnthology
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Wed Sep-27-06 12:19 PM

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4. "Where the F***** U Been Homie!"
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I put out like a hunnerd ghetto APBs out on you!
Hit the inbox.

I liked this piece too...

hit a cat up.

www.anthologyfmn.com

Enter the Written World of Fahim Malik Nassar

The House of Caine (available)

Melancholoy Funk (available)

Tha Anthology (Words 2001-2003) Poetry inspired by OKP and Wash, DC
(available)

The Spook who sat by the Radio Poetry (av

  

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mindful
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Wed Sep-27-06 05:29 PM

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5. "it's good to see you around"
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again.

my fave lines:

minds that are open,

Southern pride, cow hide, baggage I got locked inside,

fuck it. I already cried.

I'm addicted to

phat beats, track meets, running from the ill shit,

Winter heat, city streets, occasional spliffs lit,

muscle cars, dive bars, jazz, reggae, rock and roll,

silver rings, shiny things, never catch me rockin' gold.

Indy flicks, funky chicks, rhyme ciphers and mosh pits,

mangos, tangos, learning how the slang goes,

last dances, second chances, memorable circumstances


*nods* Peace~

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Pinwheels and HulaHoops|the book
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318
http://msmind.blogspot.com|the life

La magie, est dans ses yeux.
le prodige est dans son âme.

  

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revalation
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Wed Sep-27-06 07:33 PM

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6. "RE: My Addiction"
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I felt like I was hop scotchin through this whole piece...

very fun...very well written...and relatable...

I fiend for chocolate dipped strawberries and bicycle rides down steep hills...


<<<<<<<<<I take a thought and expand upon it.
I turn it around and upside down to get another perspective>>>>>>>>>>>>

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