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60636, My Addiction Posted by BarefootAquarian, Tue Sep-26-06 03:13 PM
I'm addicted to caffine, hip hop, suhshine mixed with flip flops,
good books, good looks,
pictures that my father took,
Redskins, 16 wins, rock and roll pins,
minds that are open,
Southern pride, cow hide, baggage I got locked inside,
fuck it. I already cried.
I'm addicted to
phat beats, track meets, running from the ill shit,
Winter heat, city streets, occasional spliffs lit,
muscle cars, dive bars, jazz, reggae, rock and roll,
silver rings, shiny things, never catch me rockin' gold.
Indy flicks, funky chicks, rhyme ciphers and mosh pits,
mangos, tangos, learning how the slang goes,
last dances, second chances, memorable circumstances
my addiction just enhances.
I'm a fiend for
hard laughs, well-written paragraphs, going halfs,
road trips, round hips, late nights, being right,
short fiction, local diction,
Joe. I feen for my addiction.
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60638, RE: My Addiction Posted by Amai_1, Tue Sep-26-06 03:18 PM
I'm feeling this - very interesting.
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60640, nice. Posted by STIMULI, Tue Sep-26-06 03:48 PM
very light, very enjoyable.
The guilty one is not he who commits the sin, but the one who causes the darkness.
Victor Hugo
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60645, RE: My Addiction Posted by ASIEM, Tue Sep-26-06 05:51 PM
long time since i seen you here...nice drizzle fun feelin readin this
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
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60687, Where the F***** U Been Homie! Posted by ThaAnthology, Wed Sep-27-06 12:19 PM
I put out like a hunnerd ghetto APBs out on you! Hit the inbox.
I liked this piece too...
hit a cat up.
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60695, it's good to see you around Posted by mindful, Wed Sep-27-06 05:29 PM
again.
my fave lines:
minds that are open,
Southern pride, cow hide, baggage I got locked inside,
fuck it. I already cried.
I'm addicted to
phat beats, track meets, running from the ill shit,
Winter heat, city streets, occasional spliffs lit,
muscle cars, dive bars, jazz, reggae, rock and roll,
silver rings, shiny things, never catch me rockin' gold.
Indy flicks, funky chicks, rhyme ciphers and mosh pits,
mangos, tangos, learning how the slang goes,
last dances, second chances, memorable circumstances
*nods* Peace~
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60700, RE: My Addiction Posted by revalation, Wed Sep-27-06 07:33 PM
I felt like I was hop scotchin through this whole piece...
very fun...very well written...and relatable...
I fiend for chocolate dipped strawberries and bicycle rides down steep hills...
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