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ASIEM
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"the state of things seen"
Mon May-08-06 01:47 AM by ASIEM

  

          

trippin i stay here looking for mornin
to come find it's way into
my mind make connection
wit my feet and get the nerve to leave
but here i lay another night
looking up from underneath this
self imposed prison
stuck like crack paralysis
can't move my lips won't part...
eyes racin looking for
someway to exit, somehow feel
kill the numbness and be real
well the thought lasted long enough
to write the memory
a paradox i am lying
a confession i won't tell
to anyone so i'll make believe
i am understood while i talk to you
(ponder that)

i speak in tongues twisted fates
rob graves enemies hate
lovers wait making love
in RAGE and tempers fly
while babies cry...there are no new
beginnings just ends to means
and bottom line figures scream
for more, money, more, time,
more twelve step programs to reach lost souls
nobody hears the laughter anymore
nobody see's visions from tablets
written long ago
shattered dreams make headlines
and War is the only way for PEACE...
another Paradox planted
deep in cerebral places
dark corners, hidden faces without meaning
purpose or position just lingering
for the right moment to explode
and kill innocence in bystanders
(again... ponder that)

still the heart of art will last
by anymeans and rewrite THE STORY of BEING...
UNSEEN



"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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Oh My!!!
May 08th 2006
1
RE: Oh My!!!
May 09th 2006
2
RE: Oh My!!!
Apr 08th 2008
12
RE: the state of things seen
May 09th 2006
3
RE: the state of things seen
May 09th 2006
4
RE: the state of things seen
May 09th 2006
5
RE: the state of things seen
May 10th 2006
6
just cause
May 24th 2006
7
RE: the state of things seen
May 24th 2006
8
yo i feel that
May 24th 2006
9
RE: yo i feel that
Sep 26th 2006
10
i can't quote it
Sep 28th 2006
11
RE: the state of things seen
Aug 07th 2013
13

PhotoSynthesis
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Mon May-08-06 02:36 PM

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1. "Oh My!!!"
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I was moved to "add on" to this energetic pCe -- but alas, my multi~tasking skills aren't in effect this afternoon, and time is of the essence -- So I digress ...

I enjoyed the read "VERY MUCH" -- And will revisit this as time allows.



*Luv'n The Way U Make Wordz Dance*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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ASIEM
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Tue May-09-06 08:08 AM

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2. "RE: Oh My!!!"
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yes do add on flip scripts dat dance cross screenz

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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ASIEM
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Tue Apr-08-08 09:22 AM

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12. "RE: Oh My!!!"
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hey you forgot upp for a revisit cause LOVE waits flow wit dis photo i miss you like dat

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




www.myspace.com/asiem61

  

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HueyNewton
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Tue May-09-06 12:07 PM

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3. "RE: the state of things seen"
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riveting piece hot damn . .!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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ASIEM
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Tue May-09-06 01:01 PM

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4. "RE: the state of things seen"
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pop riveted even lol thanks mayyn

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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En Vista
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Tue May-09-06 08:13 PM

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5. "RE: the state of things seen"
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I may of digressed from the meaning you intended but these lines were quite powerful in my eyes...and a poem in itself.

written long ago
shattered dreams make headlines
and War is the only way for PEACE...
another Paradox planted
deep in cerebral places
dark corners, hidden faces without meaning
purpose or position just lingering
for the right moment to explode
and kill innocence in bystanders
(again... ponder that)

still the heart of art will last
by anymeans and rewrite THE STORY of BEING...
UNSEEN




Half of what I say is meaningless; but I say it so that the other half may reach you. Kahlil Gibran

  

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ASIEM
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6. "RE: the state of things seen"
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i feel that...thanks for peepin

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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ASIEM
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7. "just cause"
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it was unseen, unnoticed,unmentioned, un...

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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ms mimi diva
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Wed May-24-06 02:40 AM

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8. "RE: the state of things seen"
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it is so strange that in the 9-5 world we are so connected with what goes on the outside, but so isolated from it.

http://worthwatering.blogspot.com
Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

  

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Wed May-24-06 09:58 AM

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9. "yo i feel that"
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peace.

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ASIEM
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10. "RE: yo i feel that"
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yo i feel that too...

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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invisible ink
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11. "i can't quote it"
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but it's good...real good..k

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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ASIEM
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13. "RE: the state of things seen"
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Wed Aug-07-13 09:36 AM by ASIEM

  

          

people bleed, sometimes
crimson Red
but then there's Black
less is known while
stories are blown
color or state of being
a thing despised
still a royal prize
a crime scene with no
victim
Zimmular circumstances
to stand your ground

hesitation raised this nation
till Higher office made mention
check the intention
jurisdiction gave isolation
the only defense
no offense when no ones left to plea
insanity this breeds
now a car of teens
a threat to he
where music was the enemy
and nothins left behind but a body layin on the ground
black blood black blood
find Kishin a friend that fear robs us never again



"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




www.myspace.com/asiem61

  

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