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56477, the state of things seen Posted by ASIEM, Mon May-08-06 01:45 AM
trippin i stay here looking for mornin to come find it's way into my mind make connection wit my feet and get the nerve to leave but here i lay another night looking up from underneath this self imposed prison stuck like crack paralysis can't move my lips won't part... eyes racin looking for someway to exit, somehow feel kill the numbness and be real well the thought lasted long enough to write the memory a paradox i am lying a confession i won't tell to anyone so i'll make believe i am understood while i talk to you (ponder that)
i speak in tongues twisted fates rob graves enemies hate lovers wait making love in RAGE and tempers fly while babies cry...there are no new beginnings just ends to means and bottom line figures scream for more, money, more, time, more twelve step programs to reach lost souls nobody hears the laughter anymore nobody see's visions from tablets written long ago shattered dreams make headlines and War is the only way for PEACE... another Paradox planted deep in cerebral places dark corners, hidden faces without meaning purpose or position just lingering for the right moment to explode and kill innocence in bystanders (again... ponder that)
still the heart of art will last by anymeans and rewrite THE STORY of BEING... UNSEEN
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
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56499, Oh My!!! Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Mon May-08-06 02:36 PM
I was moved to "add on" to this energetic pCe -- but alas, my multi~tasking skills aren't in effect this afternoon, and time is of the essence -- So I digress ...
I enjoyed the read "VERY MUCH" -- And will revisit this as time allows.
*Luv'n The Way U Make Wordz Dance*
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56551, RE: Oh My!!! Posted by ASIEM, Tue May-09-06 08:08 AM
yes do add on flip scripts dat dance cross screenz
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
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73248, RE: Oh My!!! Posted by ASIEM, Tue Apr-08-08 09:22 AM
hey you forgot upp for a revisit cause LOVE waits flow wit dis photo i miss you like dat :-)
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56553, RE: the state of things seen Posted by HueyNewton, Tue May-09-06 12:07 PM
riveting piece hot damn . .!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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56563, RE: the state of things seen Posted by ASIEM, Tue May-09-06 01:01 PM
pop riveted even lol thanks mayyn
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
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56587, RE: the state of things seen Posted by En Vista, Tue May-09-06 08:13 PM
I may of digressed from the meaning you intended but these lines were quite powerful in my eyes...and a poem in itself.
written long ago shattered dreams make headlines and War is the only way for PEACE... another Paradox planted deep in cerebral places dark corners, hidden faces without meaning purpose or position just lingering for the right moment to explode and kill innocence in bystanders (again... ponder that)
still the heart of art will last by anymeans and rewrite THE STORY of BEING... UNSEEN
Half of what I say is meaningless; but I say it so that the other half may reach you. Kahlil Gibran
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56593, RE: the state of things seen Posted by ASIEM, Wed May-10-06 01:08 AM
i feel that...thanks for peepin
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
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57393, just cause Posted by ASIEM, Wed May-24-06 01:40 AM
it was unseen, unnoticed,unmentioned, un...
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
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57396, RE: the state of things seen Posted by ms mimi diva, Wed May-24-06 02:40 AM
it is so strange that in the 9-5 world we are so connected with what goes on the outside, but so isolated from it.
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57402, yo i feel that Posted by Toothpick, Wed May-24-06 09:58 AM
peace.
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60650, RE: yo i feel that Posted by ASIEM, Tue Sep-26-06 06:16 PM
yo i feel that too...
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
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60714, i can't quote it Posted by invisible ink, Thu Sep-28-06 02:39 PM
but it's good...real good..k
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92853, RE: the state of things seen Posted by ASIEM, Wed Aug-07-13 09:36 AM
people bleed, sometimes crimson Red but then there's Black less is known while stories are blown color or state of being a thing despised still a royal prize a crime scene with no victim Zimmular circumstances to stand your ground
hesitation raised this nation till Higher office made mention check the intention jurisdiction gave isolation the only defense no offense when no ones left to plea insanity this breeds now a car of teens a threat to he where music was the enemy and nothins left behind but a body layin on the ground black blood black blood find Kishin a friend that fear robs us never again
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