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deepthought74
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Thu Apr-27-06 02:31 PM

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"SHE'S MY HEARTBEAT SWEET MELODY"


  

          

“SHE’S MY HEARTBEAT SWEET MELODY”

This conversation was long overdue
Speak from the heart
Thinking chemistry
Talk about love song
Cherry lips movement
Spending nights with you
Is that too much to ask?
Perfect timing
Kept on writing
Boasting, bragging
Beauty mark territory
Late evening, bedtime dreams
Sweaty bodies explode
Raw realness experience
Soul food thickness
Whisper in your ear, loved you since those Bonita Applebum days
Put me on some real shit
Got to admit
Lonely stares stance
Miss 2 years of laughter, smiles, sunsets
Everyday complements, profound waist line
Youthful expression got crushes
Rainfall blizzards
Middle of the spring feelings
So intense, off beat, picture painted
Section of time
Righteous investment, told the truth to get what I wanted
Passion fruit tasting right
Flashbacks gather nude breezes
Come clean, let’s get together
Autumn leaves teardrops
Driveway blushes, catches old growing
Pen, paper instrumentals
You and I
Where should today start?
Know exactly what mental topics of discussion needs, sweet things I told golden lady factor, unconscious promises
Respect her the most
Caress your back, hard day at work
You’re the one, I’m suppose to have
Angelic ballads, first time in life
I fell in love with marriage vows
Sunshine of my life, chasing sexy purist
Clear water justice, got it bad, timeless slow jam
Kiss of life messing up
Whole head romantic
Rebel of the underground
Romance your struggle, be with her forever
Playing sentimental moods between exhaling pleasures
Impeccable figure
Barefoot sips
The best of me obsession
Sitting in the park
Revisit straight from the heart
Pounding knocks glory
Banging candy apple scents
Don’t know how to behave, brown sugar poetics
Caress thigh’s wet dream
Comments dig deep
Imagine rose petal’s confidence
Soul controller of the universe
Planet earth
Progressive joy, inside my mind, furious one immorality
Write the words again
Soul mate’s move
Putting moves on love letter marvel
Hope to be the man that puts that ring on your finger
Emotional connection
Interesting, red darling bites
Marks left, lovesick higher flows
Mahogany passion, just for two, sand castle smiles
Injury prone fingertips
One more chance
Prodigy renaissance
Lady of my existence, empty out confessions
Want you slow dancing by ocean blue moonlight
Is it a crime to adore love supreme mentor?
If so, trap me in prisoner’s penmanship
Signature, next to you, alone now
Writing this poem for you
Exclusive excursion thrills
Sends chills up absolute
Sweetheart offering
Affection of my eye, suffer the consequences
Peaking into magnolia mornings witness
Allowing conscious sighs sweetness
A gift of storyline perfection
Heaven sent lyric
Of furious resurrection results
Creative work of arts
Love Jones astronomy explosion
Hardly breathing the right time
Until the next time
Becomes curve of the next lifetime
Cursive notebook listener
Coming out of original b-boy
Radio blasting dedication!

Deepthought

"When I hear wack rhymes, I get fed up"- Krs-One

"Even when I'm bragging, I'm being sincere"-LL

Verse One:

Could you tell me who released our animal instinct?
Got the white man sittin' there tickled pink.
Laughin' at us on the av

  

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Topic Outline
Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: SHE'S MY HEARTBEAT SWEET MELODY
Apr 27th 2006
1
CHERRY HEART
Aug 03rd 2006
2
RE: SHE'S MY HEARTBEAT SWEET MELODY
Nov 20th 2009
3
RE: SHE'S MY HEARTBEAT SWEET MELODY
Nov 22nd 2009
4
RE: SHE'S MY HEARTBEAT SWEET MELODY
Nov 22nd 2009
5
nice peice
Nov 26th 2009
6

PhotoSynthesis
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Thu Apr-27-06 02:55 PM

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1. "RE: SHE'S MY HEARTBEAT SWEET MELODY"
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You are such a romantic! -- I hope Ms. Melody appreciates that --


*Sweeeeeet-Ness*



A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Babynoon
Member since Dec 27th 2004
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Thu Aug-03-06 09:24 AM

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2. "CHERRY HEART"
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you have cherry skin around your heart MR!

this was dayum good!
"keep on keepin on~" I'll come to you, I'm taking the D-TRAIN! lol.

keep writing!

  

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soulsugar
Member since Dec 03rd 2007
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Fri Nov-20-09 05:56 PM

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3. "RE: SHE'S MY HEARTBEAT SWEET MELODY"
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How'd i miss this jewel apple.

  

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Isabella Moon
Member since Oct 15th 2009
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Sun Nov-22-09 09:54 AM

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4. "RE: SHE'S MY HEARTBEAT SWEET MELODY"
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This piece bears a truly LOVELY rhythm that I am diggin, deep. Love.

"How can you stand right in front of the truth and not see it?"

"OK...Who put a stop payment on my reality check?"

"Your age is one of my favorite things about you"~ Steve Martin

http://soulwhispersnheartmeditations.blogspot.com/

  

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the_best_part
Member since Jan 13th 2005
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Sun Nov-22-09 08:12 PM

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5. "RE: SHE'S MY HEARTBEAT SWEET MELODY"
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you got me here...right here.

>Perfect timing
>Kept on writing
>Boasting, bragging
>Beauty mark territory
>Late evening, bedtime dreams
>Sweaty bodies explode
>Raw realness experience
>Soul food thickness

this one line gave me a chill.

>Miss 2 years of laughter, smiles, sunsets

these...these lines...wow.

>Pen, paper instrumentals
>You and I
>Where should today start?
>Know exactly what mental topics of discussion needs, sweet
>things I told golden lady factor, unconscious promises
>Respect her the most
>Caress your back, hard day at work
>You’re the one, I’m suppose to have
>Angelic ballads, first time in life
>I fell in love with marriage vows
>Sunshine of my life, chasing sexy purist
>Clear water justice, got it bad, timeless slow jam
>Kiss of life messing up
>Whole head romantic
>Rebel of the underground
>Romance your struggle, be with her forever
>Playing sentimental moods between exhaling pleasures

i see you.

>The best of me obsession
>Sitting in the park
>Revisit straight from the heart
>Pounding knocks glory
>Banging candy apple scents
>Don’t know how to behave, brown sugar poetics
>Caress thigh’s wet dream
>Comments dig deep
>Imagine rose petal’s confidence
>Soul controller of the universe

.

>Planet earth
>Progressive joy, inside my mind, furious one immorality

.

>Write the words again


>Soul mate’s move
>Putting moves on love letter marvel
>Hope to be the man that puts that ring on your finger
>Emotional connection
>Interesting, red darling bites
>Marks left, lovesick higher flows
>Mahogany passion, just for two, sand castle smiles
>Injury prone fingertips
>One more chance
>Prodigy renaissance
>Lady of my existence, empty out confessions
>Want you slow dancing by ocean blue moonlight
>Is it a crime to adore love supreme mentor?
>If so, trap me in prisoner’s penmanship
>Signature, next to you, alone now
>Writing this poem for you
>Exclusive excursion thrills
>Sends chills up absolute
>Sweetheart offering
>Affection of my eye, suffer the consequences
>Peaking into magnolia mornings witness
>Allowing conscious sighs sweetness
>A gift of storyline perfection
>Heaven sent lyric
>Of furious resurrection results
>Creative work of arts
>Love Jones astronomy explosion
>Hardly breathing the right time
>Until the next time
>Becomes curve of the next lifetime
>Cursive notebook listener
>Coming out of original b-boy
>Radio blasting dedication!


beautiful...and intimate.

@asiaradiant

  

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Ezzsential
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Thu Nov-26-09 09:19 PM

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6. "nice peice"
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felt that romance



november 10, 2009-still never barely see them ghost

theres no way around it, a woman like me has to feel bad for herself, werd

  

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