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Topic subjectRE: SHE'S MY HEARTBEAT SWEET MELODY
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83511, RE: SHE'S MY HEARTBEAT SWEET MELODY
Posted by the_best_part, Sun Nov-22-09 08:12 PM
you got me here...right here.

>Perfect timing
>Kept on writing
>Boasting, bragging
>Beauty mark territory
>Late evening, bedtime dreams
>Sweaty bodies explode
>Raw realness experience
>Soul food thickness

this one line gave me a chill.

>Miss 2 years of laughter, smiles, sunsets

these...these lines...wow.

>Pen, paper instrumentals
>You and I
>Where should today start?
>Know exactly what mental topics of discussion needs, sweet
>things I told golden lady factor, unconscious promises
>Respect her the most
>Caress your back, hard day at work
>You’re the one, I’m suppose to have
>Angelic ballads, first time in life
>I fell in love with marriage vows
>Sunshine of my life, chasing sexy purist
>Clear water justice, got it bad, timeless slow jam
>Kiss of life messing up
>Whole head romantic
>Rebel of the underground
>Romance your struggle, be with her forever
>Playing sentimental moods between exhaling pleasures

i see you.

>The best of me obsession
>Sitting in the park
>Revisit straight from the heart
>Pounding knocks glory
>Banging candy apple scents
>Don’t know how to behave, brown sugar poetics
>Caress thigh’s wet dream
>Comments dig deep
>Imagine rose petal’s confidence
>Soul controller of the universe

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>Planet earth
>Progressive joy, inside my mind, furious one immorality

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>Write the words again


>Soul mate’s move
>Putting moves on love letter marvel
>Hope to be the man that puts that ring on your finger
>Emotional connection
>Interesting, red darling bites
>Marks left, lovesick higher flows
>Mahogany passion, just for two, sand castle smiles
>Injury prone fingertips
>One more chance
>Prodigy renaissance
>Lady of my existence, empty out confessions
>Want you slow dancing by ocean blue moonlight
>Is it a crime to adore love supreme mentor?
>If so, trap me in prisoner’s penmanship
>Signature, next to you, alone now
>Writing this poem for you
>Exclusive excursion thrills
>Sends chills up absolute
>Sweetheart offering
>Affection of my eye, suffer the consequences
>Peaking into magnolia mornings witness
>Allowing conscious sighs sweetness
>A gift of storyline perfection
>Heaven sent lyric
>Of furious resurrection results
>Creative work of arts
>Love Jones astronomy explosion
>Hardly breathing the right time
>Until the next time
>Becomes curve of the next lifetime
>Cursive notebook listener
>Coming out of original b-boy
>Radio blasting dedication!


beautiful...and intimate.