Squeezing the life out a word
Using the actions of a verb
to walk for me,
If I don't sell my brain
No one will buy it,
So I pick up the pen
Write them down
and be immortalized
In words
Captured in phrases,
That come from
Playin' with my mind,
All sumed up in this composition
Mangled among sentences,
This is my sanctuary
Where my thoughts chain together
Like notes on a staff,
Revealing the inner workings
of my flesh,
Through an allegria of tempos,
That express my emotional Rollercoster
of experiance...
Now tranced on the innerworkings of womanhood
Where the voice strugles to be heard
Yet, the experiance is written
for the healing and building
of this temple of self.

what's up D
dangerous as always
keep it
smashing

Freeworld Order
Dangurus Mines

I appreciate the style of your play on word skill, nice!!

paint the whitehouse black!
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

Squeezing the life out of a word

I think we poets give words meaning. And poetry gives our thoughts substance. You summed it all up beautifully.
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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

You've tapped into & captured my thoughts ... about a poet's words and ideas ... ~so nicely~ ... I could just take your name off ...
(AND REPLACE IT WITH MINE -- ) ----- *Not Really* -- LoL


But yes ... I likes ...

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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you know u gotta have your spizzle together up in here to address this topic....hhmmm okay pass go and for sho come back wit it cause you caught some attention good intro to you.
welcome

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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