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78115, A Poets' Life Posted by 313Poet, Wed Jan-14-09 04:21 PM
Squeezing the life out a word Using the actions of a verb to walk for me, If I don't sell my brain No one will buy it, So I pick up the pen Write them down and be immortalized In words Captured in phrases, That come from Playin' with my mind, All sumed up in this composition Mangled among sentences, This is my sanctuary Where my thoughts chain together Like notes on a staff, Revealing the inner workings of my flesh, Through an allegria of tempos, That express my emotional Rollercoster of experiance... Now tranced on the innerworkings of womanhood Where the voice strugles to be heard Yet, the experiance is written for the healing and building of this temple of self.
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78120, RE: A Poets' Life Posted by freedomfighter, Thu Jan-15-09 01:47 PM
what's up D dangerous as always keep it smashing
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78138, RE: A Poets' Life Posted by HueyNewton, Fri Jan-16-09 03:52 PM
I appreciate the style of your play on word skill, nice!!
paint the whitehouse black! -xxx
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78151, RE: A Poets' Life Posted by Intrepid Vixen, Sat Jan-17-09 05:32 PM
Squeezing the life out of a word
I think we poets give words meaning. And poetry gives our thoughts substance. You summed it all up beautifully. ~~~~~~~~ When One learns to live without fear, then One cannot be broken.
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79310, RE: A Poets' Life Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sun Apr-05-09 07:03 PM
You've tapped into & captured my thoughts ... about a poet's words and ideas ... ~so nicely~ ... I could just take your name off ... (AND REPLACE IT WITH MINE -- :P ) ----- *Not Really* -- LoL
But yes ... I likes ...
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79566, RE: A Poets' Life Posted by ASIEM, Tue Apr-21-09 06:29 PM
you know u gotta have your spizzle together up in here to address this topic....hhmmm okay pass go and for sho come back wit it cause you caught some attention good intro to you. welcome
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